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My Golden Girls

In Monorhyme, Iambic Hexameter From morning’s earliest rays to evening’s setting sun, whatever could be sweeter than two pals having fun? Side by side a gallop, how swiftly they can run. Then nightly curled in slumber, these two merge into one. Each day when I arise, they’re right outside my door Patiently awaiting, head and paws upon the floor. “Let’s go for a walk,” a phrase they both adore. Of all that I might offer, there's nothing they want more. Though many years have passed, they're ever at my side, Always shortening their pace to match up with my stride. I’m told I shouldn't spoil them, and really I have tried. But then I soon surrender and say “Let’s go outside!” Dogs, unlike most humans, are bereft of common guile. They own right next to nothing, yet life's for them worthwhile. We think ourselves quite brilliant, ahead of them a mile. The joke is they've trained us, and that's why all dogs smile. Our Golden Retrievers: Twin Sisters, Betsy & Belle

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Date: 12/27/2016 3:57:00 PM
Great poem! They are amazing friends, loving, loyal and not hypocritical like most humans. Well written, Mark.
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Mark Peterson
Date: 6/9/2018 11:56:00 PM
Thanks so much Adeniji. Regretably, one of your golden girls perished not long after this, pulling a hole in my heart that will never be filled. Her name was Belle, but Betsy survives to this day and thankfully so.
Date: 5/10/2016 4:00:00 PM
AWWWW!! How sweet is this! I have an 11 years old golden who is my whole life! I love this I am really enjoying your poems today :)-luloo
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Date: 8/12/2016 1:01:00 AM
Luloo, there you are again with the sweetest and kindest of words. Deeply appreciated. Our little twin Belle unfortunately has passed a couple of weeks ago, so this dedication to the two of them stands in rather muted silence. Treasure your golden girl, as we know pour all our affection onto Betsy.
Date: 5/9/2016 8:06:00 AM
What a beautiful piece. We can learn much from dogs.
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Date: 8/12/2016 12:58:00 AM
Thanks, Richard. You are such a treasure to the Soup and to my occasional verse. Sorry to report that our little twin girl Belle just passed...unexpectedly after show illness for just four days. Thus, the twins are no more. Still Betsy delights with an emerging personality we hadn't seen before. It will just have to do.
Date: 4/30/2016 5:29:00 PM
Your pet dogs sound like they are great fun to be with, Mark! I like this poem which boasts good meter and flowing rhyme. Your end couplet is a very pleasant twist:) Regards // paul
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Date: 8/12/2016 12:56:00 AM
Thanks, Paul. I suspect you've seen the news on my Facebook page that little Belle just passed away, so my rhyme here is now emptied.
Date: 4/15/2016 8:29:00 AM
Love the last stanza Mark...Nicely written...
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Date: 8/12/2016 12:55:00 AM
Thanks Joseph...so much. Alas, little Belle just passed away, so my poem just haunts me now.
Date: 4/5/2016 11:29:00 PM
I am smiling now too after reading these heartfelt words... Monorhyme can be difficult sometimes, but your poem seemed to flow out so effortlessly. Well done, Mark :)
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Date: 4/5/2016 11:40:00 PM
Thanks, Kelly. I had started this, thinking I'd enter it into a monorhyme contest but then noticed they wanted only five lines. Then it started not working as Iambic Tetrameter, which is how my poetry usually comes. It then got a life of its own and ended up as you see it. It's easy to do monorhyme, but usually it ends up tedious, so I'm glad you liked this one the way it turned out.
Date: 4/4/2016 12:00:00 PM
yes, I was trained by our dogs too - lovely witty write
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Date: 4/4/2016 12:29:00 PM
Thanks, Jack. I was going to enter the Monorhyme contest and wrote this, only to find that the sponsor wanted only five lines. So whoops.
Date: 3/27/2016 12:30:00 PM
Mark, I love your sweet poem. The affection of dogs just can't be surpassed because they love us so unconditionally. I wish I could see a picture of them, but I can just imagine them with your great imagery. Happy Easter my friend! #7 I am faving this. Hugs, Connie ; )
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Mark Peterson
Date: 3/27/2016 8:10:00 PM
Thanks, Connie, I treasure your remarks...as always.
Date: 3/25/2016 7:45:00 PM
This is a poem after my own heart. How I adore pets. both dogs and cats. I just wish MY dog would match his stride to MINE. I cannot get him to slow his pace. Not good with training at all.
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Mark Peterson
Date: 3/25/2016 8:28:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I appreciate your visit, comment and pleasant sentiments. Dogs are so precious.
Date: 3/24/2016 3:08:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading this Mark it made me smile. I have my own precious girl.
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Mark Peterson
Date: 3/24/2016 8:10:00 PM
Where would we be without our precious girls. They are the light and life of my world. Thanks so much for your visit.

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