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My Goddess

My Goddess I Met A Goddess! FroM The very starT Of course it was heR Had dreamt of this daY Pierced my ennuI An unseeN KnifinG ShiV LifE NeveR More clearlY Defined. The patH It changes in A Flash now she is neaR Mind is openeD I n t u i T Key tO LocK Eyes Each glow Pleasant smile Moment lingers Your curly brown hair Showering strong shoulders Every breath filling bosom Lusciousness, sinuously moves Flowing across the room, wild river Frozen deer I become, looking but not, Round, wide eyes misdirecting intention Obvious I’m caught. Could you be too? Meeting for the first time, crowds part S m i l i n g d e s p i t e m y s e l f Te l e g r a p h i n g i n t e n t All pretense forgone Reaching deeply I asked you Now my Girl 5/7/16 © Thomas W. Quigley

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Date: 5/9/2016 12:52:00 PM
Absolutely brilliant and beautiful. A great 7 for me friend.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/9/2016 10:42:00 PM
Thanks, Funom!
Date: 5/9/2016 12:48:00 AM
A marvellous write, Tom. Very creative. T.J
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/9/2016 10:16:00 AM
Thanks, TJ!
Date: 5/8/2016 6:58:00 PM
Acrostic. shape. Etheree. romance. you have it all here Tom....excellent
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/8/2016 8:05:00 PM
Thanks Tim! Well received as a Mother's Day gift too.
Date: 5/8/2016 1:05:00 PM
Hello Tome!! A totally delightful Acrostic-Etheree. Just right -- and the form is quite wonderful. Great Work!! (Thanks too for commenting on my most recently posted poem today.) Cheers and Best, Gary
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/8/2016 4:28:00 PM
Thanks, Gary!
Date: 5/7/2016 7:14:00 PM
this is fantastic shape poetry And all the work you had to go through to bold each letter that makes up the total phrase .awesome job!!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/7/2016 8:50:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Date: 5/7/2016 4:10:00 PM
- A delightful poem Tom, a unique shape :) - I agree ...... it looks like a key - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/7/2016 8:50:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 5/7/2016 1:24:00 PM
Wonderful. Could be the key to her heart as well. Enjoyed every syllable.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/7/2016 8:51:00 PM
Thanks! Glad you liked it. A key is a good interpretation...