My Girl

As beautiful as the purple flush of dawn,
loveliness broke on me like some rare flower,
eyes like mountain water that overflowing on a rock,
as bright as a blazing star,
brilliant and as hard too, as electric light.

Her voice rang like a bird-call through her rustling fancies,
words sounding like wavelets on a summer shore,	
beautiful pearls of wisdom slip from her mouth without even knowing,
smile flashed over her face, like sunshine over a flower,
looked like the picture of a young rapt saint, lost in heavenly musing.

Her hair dropped on her pallid cheeks, like sea-weed on a clam,
lips are tremulous as brook-water is, 
laugh is like a rainbow-tinted spray,
cheeks as soft as July peaches,
her sweetness halting like a tardy May.

She is calm like a mountain brooding o'er the sea,
her breath upon my cheek like a perfumed air,
our love is pure as the snowy leaves that fold over the flower's heart,
sweet as a summer night without a breath,
my love for her is like the sovereign moon that rules the sea.
	
She always gave me a surprised look, 
like a child catching an older person in a foolish statement.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A   Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 10:25 PM
Anytime Seth....Linda
A   Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 8:54 AM
AWESOME POEM. LINDA
Musinga Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 10:24 PM
Thanks. Love Seth
A  Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 1:05 AM
Seth, Enjoyed reading your poem, Forever ~SKAT~
Musinga Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 1:43 AM
I like it when you read my poems. You can contact me on +264817145722 or [email protected].
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace