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With a little wink before you slink away, you melt me the good times we had frolicking in the glimmering pure white sand you were more than just a one night stand tonight comfort me, warm me, with thoughts of you and in our morning be that twinkle in my sun drenched eye
The Answer Contest hosted by Skat 08/08/2015

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Date: 8/19/2015 8:38:00 PM
I still love yours, tim. Maybe third time I have seen it. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 8/18/2015 12:09:00 AM
Tim, I just came by to say congratulations on your awesome win:-)Alexis
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Date: 8/17/2015 11:12:00 PM
Tim. Congratulations, on what you thought the Answer should be in less than 8 lines.... Always ~SKAT
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Date: 8/10/2015 1:33:00 AM
The winking in the twinkling of the sun..I can see that. Beautifully penned Timothy
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Date: 8/9/2015 10:43:00 AM
Beautifully written... as always... You always make me sigh!... And that's not easy in an ols fart like me... LOL... Just joking. Loved it!
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Date: 8/9/2015 9:32:00 AM
Hey Tim... you're not just another pretty face!!!! LOL
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Date: 8/8/2015 11:59:00 PM
I like how you made it romantic. NICELY done.
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Date: 8/8/2015 4:26:00 PM
Your words are strung together like a necklace of love beads creating a beautiful pattern within our hearts. Emile.
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Date: 8/8/2015 3:36:00 PM
- Oh .... this is lovely, Tim - I wish you good luck in the contest .... and a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/8/2015 2:59:00 PM
Very Romantic Tim, Lovely write Best Wishes Kevin
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Date: 8/8/2015 2:38:00 PM
Ohh....sweet as ever, Tim. Lovely write. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/8/2015 1:21:00 PM
Tim, sweetly romantic, a sun drenched 7 and thanks for visiting my tribute poem
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Date: 8/8/2015 12:48:00 PM
WoW!!!! Sweet moment you have shared together, I love your write it is excellence. Good luck in the contest........A.M.
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/8/2015 12:54:00 PM
Thank you my friend

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