Tim Smith Poet Free verse

My Girl

With a little wink before you slink away, you melt me

the good times we had

frolicking in the glimmering pure white sand

you were more than just a one night stand

tonight comfort me, warm me, with thoughts of you

and in our morning be that twinkle in my sun drenched eye



The Answer Contest
hosted by Skat
08/08/2015

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Andrea Dietrich August 19, 2015 at 8:38 PM I still love yours, tim. Maybe third time I have seen it. Congrats on a well deserved win.

Alexis Y. August 18, 2015 at 12:09 AM Tim, I just came by to say congratulations on your awesome win:-)Alexis

Skat A August 17, 2015 at 11:12 PM Tim. Congratulations, on what you thought the Answer should be in less than 8 lines.... Always ~SKAT

Charmaine Chircop August 10, 2015 at 1:33 AM The winking in the twinkling of the sun..I can see that. Beautifully penned Timothy

Carol Eastman August 9, 2015 at 10:43 AM Beautifully written... as always... You always make me sigh!... And that's not easy in an ols fart like me... LOL... Just joking. Loved it!

Jack Ellison August 9, 2015 at 9:32 AM Hey Tim... you're not just another pretty face!!!! LOL

Andrea Dietrich August 8, 2015 at 11:59 PM I like how you made it romantic. NICELY done.

Emile Pinet August 8, 2015 at 4:26 PM Your words are strung together like a necklace of love beads creating a beautiful pattern within our hearts. Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 8, 2015 at 3:36 PM - Oh .... this is lovely, Tim - I wish you good luck in the contest .... and a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kevin Leake August 8, 2015 at 2:59 PM Very Romantic Tim, Lovely write Best Wishes Kevin

Eileen Manassian August 8, 2015 at 2:38 PM Ohh....sweet as ever, Tim. Lovely write. Good luck in the contest.

Constance La France August 8, 2015 at 1:21 PM Tim, sweetly romantic, a sun drenched 7 and thanks for visiting my tribute poem

Afolabi Muideen August 8, 2015 at 12:48 PM WoW!!!! Sweet moment you have shared together, I love your write it is excellence. Good luck in the contest........A.M. Tim Smith August 8, 2015 at 12:54 PM Thank you my friend