My Garden of Joy

I remember, I remember my garden of joy,
It gave me great happiness when I was a boy
At the bottom of the garden was a delightful stream,
When alone, I would sit beside it, meditate and dream.
In the garden stood an ancient apple tree,
In the spring time its coloured buds were a joy to see.
In the autumn the russet apples were harvested in,
Our neighbours also enjoyed surplus apples from our bin.

At summertime my two friends would come in and play cricket,
Game stopped when the batsman knocked the ball into the thicket.
On summer evenings Mum or Dad read us a story in the eventide,
Other children came in, lemonade and biscuits mum did provide.
Subject to weather mum packed a picnic on a Sunday afternoon,
To meet the local villagers, to gossip, farmers sold their eggs, that was a boon
                                                                                                                         The villagers would meet, discus each other’s fortune, on the village green,                                                                                                                          There all the local gossip everyone could tell or glean.
The young ones played football, cricket or handball,
The girls often beat the boys, that did not go down well.
Some times in the evening Dad would take me down to listen to the local band,                                                                                                            Some music I did not like, some I thought was grand.
I left home at twenty one to work in the city,
My little village is now a small town, what a pity.
I have photo’s to remind me of my happy past,
With an expanding world villages like mine will never last.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Agustin Avatar
July 31, 2025 at 2:46 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Edmonds  Avatar
July 17, 2023 at 8:54 AM
Wonderful memories of when you were a lad, beautiful poetry Terry… Belle
Kalita Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 5:38 AM
A beautiful spontaneous fusion of moments and memory.
Cook Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 2:05 AM
I'm a novice at writing. I've been exploring the different structures and I'm failing to see see how this can be described as ABC. Please guide/ instruct me
Robertson Avatar
July 11, 2022 at 10:26 AM
Very good. This brings good memories
Ray Avatar
July 11, 2022 at 9:42 AM
line by line the essence is grasped, a worthy draft of memories...
Mcconnell Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 1:29 PM
A lovely piece Terry, a real joyous garden indeed with great rhyme and flow. Have a great day, Gordon
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