My Garden

My love come and partake of my garden
My heart is in full bloom with love for you 
Shower me with kisses like morning dew
This love i have will not fade nor harden

Please come caress each petal with your touch
Before we met my garden was empty 
It was filled with many thorns and was lonely 
My darling I needed your care so much

Darling you're the gardener of my dreams
You tend to each flower with so much love
You are a precious gift from up above
We're the perfect match and make a good team

Your love is so comforting, you don't push or shove
You are my shooting star and my moon beam


11-25-16
Alexis Y.

loveitalian sonnet

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Colin Clement

October 19, 2021 at 6:24 AM

Heart warming. Love and togetherness. What a nice poem. "My Garden" says everything about love that should be. Nice job!

Bobby May

December 18, 2018 at 7:33 PM

I don't know if this is the right one but, this one is going on my favorite list!

Alexis Y.

December 18, 2018 at 7:37 PM

It is the right one. I'm glad you enjoyed it so that you had to fav it. Thanks my friend:-) Alexis

Christopher Flaherty

July 5, 2018 at 5:44 PM

Before me met my garden was empty Filled with many Thorns Absolutely love these 2 lines. They could be a poem on there own Loved this brilliant 7 Fantastic write Alexis

J Hamilton Gist

May 16, 2018 at 6:36 PM

Sounds like a man worth your wisdom...cool!

Debbie Duncan

April 12, 2018 at 7:26 PM

This is nice :)

Afzal Nusker

December 5, 2016 at 12:24 AM

Alexis, this is a very indulging poem with beautifully portrayed emotions. A 7 & definitely going in my fav list.

Charlie Smith

November 28, 2016 at 9:55 AM

Lovely Alexis, content is much more significant to me than form. Form didn't exist until someone wrote something worth reading...

CayCay Godwin

November 26, 2016 at 2:06 PM

My precious child, I owe you an apology/explanation. I was on this page days ago and fell in love with your poem, was awed by your poetical progress then became concerned about syll count and iambic pent so I looked up Ital Sonnet, the phone rang and I never made it back. Until now. One of my fav, Andrea, does use iambic pent. for Ital Sonnets, but I remain unclear about the requirements. BUT I am quite clear that this is beautiful and touching and I'm running out of room to say I love it ..

Arthur Vaso

November 25, 2016 at 9:27 PM

I loved this, for the obvious reasons and one not so obvious, as we both wrote such different things that ended up in the same place! :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

November 25, 2016 at 1:18 PM

I agree w/all the poetic voices chiming in on this smooth romantic Italian sonnet, Alexis. Your passion and earnest emotions are so well expressed. A very sensual poem. Wonderful flow ... love the last line. Now that's saying something. Love the poem though. Love and joy to you, dear lady.

Chris Green

November 25, 2016 at 7:32 AM

What a beautiful and heart penned poem. When he arrived the garden bloomed as never before. Such an affectionate thought and gorgeous scene. I love the format of this Alexis, it feels so good to read this morning. My first of the day and I couldn't be happier with my choice.