My Garden

My love come and partake of my garden My heart is in full bloom with love for you Shower me with kisses like morning dew This love i have will not fade nor harden Please come caress each petal with your touch Before we met my garden was empty It was filled with many thorns and was lonely My darling I needed your care so much Darling you're the gardener of my dreams You tend to each flower with so much love You are a precious gift from up above We're the perfect match and make a good team Your love is so comforting, you don't push or shove You are my shooting star and my moon beam 11-25-16 Alexis Y.

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Colin Clement

Date: 10/19/2021 6:24:00 AM

Heart warming. Love and togetherness. What a nice poem. "My Garden" says everything about love that should be. Nice job!

Bobby May

Date: 12/18/2018 7:33:00 PM

I don't know if this is the right one but, this one is going on my favorite list!

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/18/2018 7:37:00 PM

It is the right one. I'm glad you enjoyed it so that you had to fav it. Thanks my friend:-) Alexis

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 7/5/2018 5:44:00 PM

Before me met my garden was empty Filled with many Thorns Absolutely love these 2 lines. They could be a poem on there own Loved this brilliant 7 Fantastic write Alexis

J Hamilton Gist

Date: 5/16/2018 6:36:00 PM

Sounds like a man worth your wisdom...cool!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/12/2018 7:26:00 PM

This is nice :)

Afzal Nusker

Date: 12/5/2016 12:24:00 AM

Alexis, this is a very indulging poem with beautifully portrayed emotions. A 7 & definitely going in my fav list.

Charlie Smith

Date: 11/28/2016 9:55:00 AM

Lovely Alexis, content is much more significant to me than form. Form didn't exist until someone wrote something worth reading...

Caycay Jennings

Date: 11/26/2016 2:06:00 PM

My precious child, I owe you an apology/explanation. I was on this page days ago and fell in love with your poem, was awed by your poetical progress then became concerned about syll count and iambic pent so I looked up Ital Sonnet, the phone rang and I never made it back. Until now. One of my fav, Andrea, does use iambic pent. for Ital Sonnets, but I remain unclear about the requirements. BUT I am quite clear that this is beautiful and touching and I'm running out of room to say I love it ..

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/25/2016 9:27:00 PM

I loved this, for the obvious reasons and one not so obvious, as we both wrote such different things that ended up in the same place! :)

Jeff Davies

Date: 11/25/2016 8:25:00 PM

Nice, uplifting poem Alexis. Really well written.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/25/2016 1:18:00 PM

I agree w/all the poetic voices chiming in on this smooth romantic Italian sonnet, Alexis. Your passion and earnest emotions are so well expressed. A very sensual poem. Wonderful flow ... love the last line. Now that's saying something. Love the poem though. Love and joy to you, dear lady.

Chris Green

Date: 11/25/2016 7:32:00 AM

What a beautiful and heart penned poem. When he arrived the garden bloomed as never before. Such an affectionate thought and gorgeous scene. I love the format of this Alexis, it feels so good to read this morning. My first of the day and I couldn't be happier with my choice.

Phil Capitano

Date: 11/25/2016 7:12:00 AM

Lovely Alexis, if he does not come to your garden he is a fool. Much love.

Probir Gupta

Date: 11/25/2016 6:19:00 AM

a 'moon beam' like sonnet ... a pleasure to read ...