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My Fuse Explodes

Three neighbors litter on our street buzzing along as I stroll past their gates; and they jiggle like vicious wasps while a silent howl drills on my head. Yeah…all that drama, women of farce, greeting me coyly with pretentious smiles… I hear them cussing behind my back those verbal bacteria infecting my night. So why not face me , confront your self-disgust thrown at my now distorted eye-to-eye stare? Maggots! Low-life drones who thrive on cheap thrills weaving vile intrigues just to get some flipped attention… I close my eyes for a moment to grab some air, but the noise yells without restraint. Well, it’s my time to get back ,after I let a blade of screech hit the asphalt ground. Under a reddened sky, a fuse explodes, “Hey, get off my cloud or you all will be squashed!” SKAT's Get Off Of My Cloud 6/17/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/18/2015 11:45:00 PM
NETTE, Congratulations on your cloud win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/17/2015 6:08:00 PM
Dam, now you know where I live....
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Date: 6/17/2015 11:21:00 AM
hands up.. I just drop by to say ,Congrats nette !!! you are awesome :O))
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Date: 6/17/2015 7:37:00 AM
ALRIGHT NETTE!!!!
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Date: 6/17/2015 3:34:00 AM
good one Nette sure told them gl in contest hugs 7
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Date: 6/16/2015 11:28:00 PM
This one grabbed me. Gutsy, formidable poem!
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Date: 6/16/2015 9:01:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS, THANK YOU FOR THE ENTRY.... Nette, I enjoyed the poem, highly, soup-mail...SKAT
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Date: 6/16/2015 6:07:00 PM
There's an Old Geezer in every neighborhood but in yours there are Three! ...OUCH!
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Date: 6/16/2015 12:17:00 PM
- Specific and clearly speech !! :) - Good luck in contest, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/16/2015 11:58:00 AM
WOW Nette you didn't hold back with this one it sure packs a powerful message! good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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