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My Funeral

Clear blue sky came to witness my funeral , decided to not throw any tears or any stones Came to say goodbye to me before earth analyze my bones Down in the river they are drowning my sins , my demons , my guilts Sea shattered down his waves , asking them to give me some peace Asking angels not to trap my soul , no ...but to get it release In the God heavens I'll regrow my soul I'm not dieing nor alive And no killing disease to fight so I can survive Just killing thoughts which is controlling my fate and my path

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Lu Loo

Date: 1/10/2016 9:18:00 AM

"I'm not dieing nor alive And no killing disease to fight so I can survive"... Very powerfully stated, well done Dalia -luloo *smiles*

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/10/2016 10:10:00 AM

Thank you very much my dear for ur kind words and ur pleasing visit , it means alot for me, hugs / / :)

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/6/2016 3:54:00 PM

Powerful language and imagery... I really like the way you stretch your poems out... BRAVO my dear!! Best wishes, Keith

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/6/2016 3:56:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend for ur lovely comment and ur supporting words , it means alot to me , hugs / / :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 1/5/2016 2:46:00 PM

very interesting words right here....the thought provoke-tion is evidently clear....God Knows our hearts so much better than us....and if we Focus On Him, there is no negativity to discuss....;)

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/5/2016 2:56:00 PM

Thank you very much my dear for ur thoughtful words , but as I said this poem is totally fictional I just wanted to write something a little bit different but I'm glad that people liked it, so many thanks for your delightful visit and your lovely comment..hugs / / :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/5/2016 2:06:00 PM

- When your time will come ..... I'm sure the sun will shine, and the angels will welcome you with loving arms - Touching and lovely written, dear Dalia :) - big hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/5/2016 2:17:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear Anne lise for your delightful and lovely words , I'm honored by these words truly......big hugs for you too dear....// :)

Michael Whatley

Date: 1/5/2016 12:07:00 PM

Love the personification of the sky here, Dalia! A beautiful message behind this.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/5/2016 12:12:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend for ur lovely, sweet and interesting comment , much appreciated....hugs / / :)

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 1/5/2016 4:09:00 AM

You made something that could easily be something dark and overwhelming, to something beautiful and inspiring Dalia. Just kill all the stuff that needs to be gone. Let the best of you live! Always, Laura

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/5/2016 7:09:00 AM

Thank you very much my sweet laura for the supportive words and for your delightful, incorrigin comment , I appreciate your kindness......hugs / / :)

Constance La France

Date: 1/5/2016 3:42:00 AM

Dalia, oh so deep and dark, just my kind of poetry ~

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/5/2016 7:06:00 AM

Thank you very much my dear for ur sweet sweet comment and ur delightful visit , I'm glad you liked it , and I hope I can write more good poetry that your gonna like.....many thanks and hugs / / :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 1/5/2016 2:20:00 AM

Damn Dalia, this is just real good soul talk! The clear blue sky is right in not judging your life, it has been there with you as a girl and woman, showing you innocent color and moods, and even the art of God, just living with you blameless...the masculine sea and his protection of your soul, that's so beautiful, the limbo of doubtful thoughts and paths, this profound, I want to rescue you, I want avenge you from judgemental demons and angels my Violet Poetess...Justin...this is masterpiece!

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/5/2016 7:26:00 AM

Oh my dear can't thank you enough for your supportive and delightful words , it means alot for me , I do appreciate every word , I'm pleased and honored that you liked my fictional poem , I hope I get the chance to write even better poetry that your gonna like.....many thanks once again for your lovely and kind words....hugs / / :)

White Sage

Date: 1/5/2016 2:13:00 AM

the poem's well written, such fiction like it's reality...nice write Dalia

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/5/2016 7:05:00 AM

Thank you very much my friend for ur supportive words and your pleasant comment , it means alot for me. ?..hugs / / :)

Skat A

Date: 1/4/2016 8:12:00 PM

Dalia, this is deep and epic. Them thoughts can get the best of us. I rate your poem with a seven. Skat

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/4/2016 8:37:00 PM

Thank you very much my dear SKAT this means alot for me , I'm honored that you liked my fictional poem....hugs / / :) dalia