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My Full Blown Addiction

A new full blown addiction ls now what l possess Which has entirely captured my body and soul Its intense hold…. mere words cannot express Five months now since it started Yet it is completely out of control It is all l can think about Embedded eternally in my soul This desire and longing is unbearable The deep need for it is above all other I must get my fix come what may If not …what desperate measures it may uncover? I believe my addiction is with me forever For my life ,its entirety and no shorter I must confess that my addiction is My beautiful five month old granddaughter!!

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Joe Maverick

Date: 1/10/2025 4:59:00 AM

Oh well i coud'a guessed you'd be worse than Me Deb..I mind you such is mind numbing Stuff to the 'woke world ' geez i'm almost Home right now.?? Just thinking kn this sort of Stuff' mind you i'd still be 30 years behind even Back home i reckon?? And i'll even forgive ya fur Plageur-risin me addiction line.' Well what more Can I say.?? Oh yeah.' G'day..And to the nipper too may things be just fine.)

John Read

Date: 1/5/2025 5:50:00 AM

Hi Deb, there's no better addiction God bless her.

Deb M
Date: 1/5/2025 6:10:00 AM

Thankyou John! Debx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/4/2025 8:14:00 PM

Wait 'til your granddaughter starts her '12-step program' with you. You'll be head over heels doing cartwheels. HNY, Gershon

Deb M
Date: 1/5/2025 2:14:00 AM

You made me laugh BB! Clever….Debx

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/4/2025 8:13:00 PM

Dear Deb, a perfect addiction, indeed! You set up the ending perfectly! Enjoyed this delight. Thank you for helping me remember the birth of my grandchildren! Welcome to a very special world. Blessings to you and your family, especially the newest membe! Happy New Year!

Deb M
Date: 1/5/2025 2:37:00 AM

Thankyou Sam…..yes it is a very special world and l am loving it….they fill your being with so much love. By your comment l assume your grand children are grown….happy to remind you of their births! Debx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/4/2025 8:10:00 PM

Congratulations, Deb. They really are GRAND, aren't they? I like how you withheld the the identity till the end. Janice

Deb M
Date: 1/5/2025 2:17:00 AM

Unbelievably GRAND Janice….l love it!! Thanks so much for your lovely comment! Debx

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/4/2025 8:09:00 AM

Dear Deb, a beautiful addiction and addition to your precious family. Congratulations for your treasured granddaughter! Your rhyme expresses the feeling of being instantly hooked and the depth of your unconditional love so wonderfully, building the suspense to reveal the 'addiction' in such a vibrant, heartwarming way. I certainly understand where you're coming from, my sweet poet friend. Warmest wishes for a joyous 2025.. ~Susan

Deb M
Date: 1/4/2025 1:06:00 PM

Hi Susan…..yes l am hooked…..hooked, line and sinker haha! As always thankyou my friend for such a gracious comment! Debx

Joel Hawksley

Date: 1/4/2025 5:50:00 AM

As a grandparent myself, I completely understand this! This poem perfectly expresses the all-consuming love we feel for our grandchildren. It's wonderful.

Deb M
Date: 1/4/2025 7:58:00 AM

That’s exactly what is it Joel all-consuming love and it is truly wonderful….l love your comment….Thankyou….Debx

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/4/2025 4:10:00 AM

Hdey, I like your addiction, i was looking a my grandson when he was four, now he is 18! Where do go? HNY. Grannie Pangie

Deb M
Date: 1/4/2025 7:51:00 AM

Hey Grannie Pangie (l love that Ha!)….I know time and years do fly by so quickly so l will savour every moment l can with her….grand children are such a blessing! I know how proud and loving you are with Eddie…..take care my friend….Debx

Len Gasun

Date: 1/3/2025 9:54:00 PM

Wow! Beautiful poem expressing your wonderful addiction my dear poet friend Deb. I'm so happy for you. Sending you and your adorable granddaughter a big warm hug. Thanks for sharing and Have a very happy, healthy and prosperous New Year 2025!

Deb M
Date: 1/4/2025 7:46:00 AM

What a lovely sweet comment Len….thankyou so much….Happy New Year! Debx

David Crandall

Date: 1/3/2025 6:17:00 PM

Aww, what a great poem, Deb. Building up all that suspense and then an ending that does not disappoint! I'm happy for you!

Deb M
Date: 1/3/2025 6:30:00 PM

Thanks David that is such a sweet comment! Appreciated my friend! Debx

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 1/3/2025 5:22:00 PM

The best addiction you could have Deb, enjoy every moment you spend with your granddaughter… Beryl

Deb M
Date: 1/3/2025 6:29:00 PM

I intend too Beryl hehe….such sweetness! Thankyou my friend….Debx

Terry Flood

Date: 1/3/2025 4:49:00 PM

Lovely poem, Deb.. and I get it. But be forewarned… get in lots of cheap ice lollies (popsicles?) and hide the fancy ice cream cones with a chocolate flake in…. Cos they only eat half of the damn thing and the rest melts on your sofa. Enjoy ;-)

Deb M
Date: 1/3/2025 6:28:00 PM

Sneaky one grandad haha! I will take that on board Terry….thanks my friend! Debx

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/3/2025 2:03:00 PM

Very nice. What a lovely way to begin the New Year with this reading. It's upbeat, kind, and motivational. You can't find a more appropriate addiction than this one.

Deb M
Date: 1/3/2025 6:26:00 PM

Awww thanks Lassad….what a lovely comment! Debx

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 1/3/2025 12:35:00 PM

That is so precious Deb, congratulations! What a beautiful addiction :) Happy New Year sweet lady, I am happy for you! Enjoy the many grammy moments which await you in 2025 and may you and your family be blessed!

Deb M
Date: 1/3/2025 6:25:00 PM

I love that Bj….”grammy moments”…..thankyou so much my lovely friend! Debx

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/3/2025 12:26:00 PM

This is so special! Such a nice addiction to have. Congrats :)

Deb M
Date: 1/3/2025 6:22:00 PM

Oh thanks Heidi l appreciate your kind words! Debx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/3/2025 10:34:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this lovely write. What a great addiction to have. Congratulations.... Wish I had the same addiction but not yet... Have A Blessed New Year 2025 writing away.................

Deb M
Date: 1/3/2025 11:15:00 AM

Hopefully soon for you also Paula! Thankyou my friend….Debx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/3/2025 10:20:00 AM

Wow, five months ago, how time flies Deb, they're adorable at that age, took me back when my three daughters were that age. Hope your new year is off to a good start. Tom

Deb M
Date: 1/3/2025 10:33:00 AM

I know its gone so fast….such a beautiful age….l just love it Tom…..thanks Tom! Soupmail…Debx

Jay Narain

Date: 1/3/2025 9:55:00 AM

Nothing is more addictive than young grandchildren. Nice poem.

Deb M
Date: 1/3/2025 10:34:00 AM

I know Jay….l am loving it! Thanks….Debx

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/3/2025 9:21:00 AM

Lovely! Such a beautiful read to start my My New Year. Positive, loving and inspiring. Thank you, Deb.

Deb M
Date: 1/3/2025 9:27:00 AM

Why thankyou Joe…l really do appreciate your kind gracious words….Happy New Year to you! Debx

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 1/3/2025 9:00:00 AM

I was intrigued right to the end, Ded- as to what you had become addicted too. Luckily, nothing harmful. Congratulations on being a grandparent. So lucky. SuZ

Deb M
Date: 1/3/2025 9:18:00 AM

Haha that was my intention Suz! Thankyou for the congrats l feel incredibly lucky indeed! Debx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/3/2025 8:47:00 AM

Even men love babies. It's a healthy addiction. Happy New Year.

Deb M
Date: 1/3/2025 9:16:00 AM

Thankyou Victor and Happy new year to you! Cuddles…Debx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/3/2025 8:44:00 AM

Aww…love this! My youngest of 6 is already 10 years old. Enjoy the sweet scent, the brush of soft cheeks, the cradle hold, falling asleep with her in your arms, the first words, smiles and teeth…I could go on… Hugs, congrats, Happy New Year!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/3/2025 12:44:00 PM

Most likely 6. My D-I-L has breast c. I don’t think they were having more anyway. Oldest daughter was told she’s done and my youngest I don’t think so either. So probably great-grands, and that will be diff. LOL. I am so happy and thrilled that I’ve hd this time! Truly blessed! Enjoy the journey!

Deb M
Date: 1/3/2025 9:39:00 AM

Oh Kim you described that beautifully….l will enjoy every moment of what you said! Any likelihood there will be another one for you?? Or does it stop at 6? Thankyou so much my friend! Debx