My Friends Screen

Head hanging off couch waiting to be fed
Things take on new perspective looking up
'Twas noon bored to tears just lying in bed
Had to have some coke and ice in my big cup

Coke and chips are good to give me the strength
They are always here even though wish were
Not, they will be gone away at some length
Character traits say we can depend on her

Recycled teen can now visit friend
Get to station_for heard in distance train
Recycled teen now has fun is that plain
First of life was hard_life is better at the end

Enjoying golden years_no more inbetween
Mother and daddy can't now my friends screen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Onclaud Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 3:44 AM
an elegant sonnet that stirs the heart, sara! more prayers for your speedy recovery and winning wishes too! :) huggs, nette
Oimbo Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 10:45 PM
this is a splendid sonnets and the rhyme is sure
Sweetheart Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 4:32 PM
A beautiful write Sara.. your last two lines are so sweet and powerful my friend .. lovely Sonnet and good luck if for the new contest .. enjoyed with luv..
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February 11, 2011 at 3:03 PM
Enjoyed your thoughts and words today... true poetry at its best is all we get from you my dear Sara...luv Michael
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February 11, 2011 at 1:53 PM
Hope you keep enjoying the golden years, Sara. I wouldn't want to be a recycled teen for anything. My parents used to make futile efforts to "screen" boys I wanted to date. In retrospect, I should have heeded their warnings. Love, Carolyn
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