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Head hanging off couch waiting to be fed Things take on new perspective looking up 'Twas noon bored to tears just lying in bed Had to have some coke and ice in my big cup Coke and chips are good to give me the strength They are always here even though wish were Not, they will be gone away at some length Character traits say we can depend on her Recycled teen can now visit friend Get to station_for heard in distance train Recycled teen now has fun is that plain First of life was hard_life is better at the end Enjoying golden years_no more inbetween Mother and daddy can't now my friends screen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/12/2011 3:44:00 AM
an elegant sonnet that stirs the heart, sara! more prayers for your speedy recovery and winning wishes too! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/11/2011 10:45:00 PM
this is a splendid sonnets and the rhyme is sure
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Date: 2/11/2011 4:32:00 PM
A beautiful write Sara.. your last two lines are so sweet and powerful my friend .. lovely Sonnet and good luck if for the new contest .. enjoyed with luv..
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Date: 2/11/2011 3:03:00 PM
Enjoyed your thoughts and words today... true poetry at its best is all we get from you my dear Sara...luv Michael
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Date: 2/11/2011 1:53:00 PM
Hope you keep enjoying the golden years, Sara. I wouldn't want to be a recycled teen for anything. My parents used to make futile efforts to "screen" boys I wanted to date. In retrospect, I should have heeded their warnings. Love, Carolyn
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