My Friends- the Good Side of Me

The human qualities and potential isn’t limited nor territorial kindness at its peak is indeed interracial it is brutal to keep this knowledge confidential b’cos, my experience is first hand and crucial. Pouring out serial disgusting output, I've been consistent hence nurturing my friendship is menial, such a risk is definitely consequential and it becomes official when a friend’s head is hit Despite my social status compounded in filth and lots of irritating effect I've been embraced and kissed by luck making me believe life is indeed partial A controversial creature, I am yet, surrounded by the wonders of true friendship its complete care, no where near superficial its love, so congenital to the point, I feel I’m in denial My stink spreads across towns my words attract infirmities my mind has been the warehouse of lawlessness and everything bad is registered in my accountability but the one and only good side of me is you my friends the day you leave, is the day I join the Dinosaurs

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/31/2015 6:04:00 PM
You've testified from your soul Funom. Now let the love of your fellow man set you free. It is such a gift to read from someone who has such a different background. Peace. :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2015 10:11:00 AM
thank you robert.... Your words are encouraging
Date: 1/31/2015 4:03:00 PM
No matter how different we may feel, there is always someone out there who feels the same way. Good friends are often found when we least expect it... An amazing piece of writing, Funom! So expressive!
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2015 10:10:00 AM
Thank you Kelly... Your words are kind, smooth and peaceful. I am greatly encouraged
Date: 1/31/2015 1:31:00 AM
I believe that everyone can have their own moments of "lawlessness", Funom. I can't think of it this way when the intention was for the protection of another. You are in no form nor manner a bad person! I think also, you've many friends here.:) Keep well, stay safe, Mikki
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2015 10:09:00 AM
Thank you Mikki.... I am happy I have friends who have my back... I love you all so so so much
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