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My Friend

You were my friend until the end

for you turned on me

why did you make my cry

 I'm forever lost in time

you were the lady that changed the light you gave
me strength to fight

now on my own cold and alone

to me, you will always be the lady of beauty for all to see .          5th october 2010[L.B.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/11/2010 9:24:00 PM
Duncacn, i really enjoy your writing, very touching...It's like you are reading my heart.
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Date: 10/8/2010 6:45:00 AM
very deep sarah x
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Date: 10/5/2010 8:38:00 PM
Interesting write, Duncan...don't ever give up! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 10/5/2010 5:29:00 PM
beauty is only as beauty does... enjoyed reading today!
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Date: 10/5/2010 3:27:00 PM
beautiful write, enjoyed...P.D.
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