Get Your Premium Membership

My Freedom I Claim

Today, finally, with: Necessity, Fate, Destiny, Karma and Dharma, Face to face I came Who All to me with great emphasis declared that Their obedient child I ought to be And There was nothing, in my life I should ever, Think, say or do, if first, Their consent to me was not given! Attentively and with great respect, their arguments, I heard Making certain not to make any sound But when, the courage in my heart, suddenly, I found My voice I raised and daringly announced: “Since your child I am then some of your powers in me you Have invested So as to do the things that you wish me, reality to make Thus Some sort of freedom I must possess, otherwise, I do not see The reason into this life for which I was brought, So It seems to me that with you, I am a co-creator and as such Have rights and responsibilities which you to me cannot deny And the most sacred right of all is that of my FREEDOM which now, With respect, I have from you to claim For My vocation to complete, as Providence expects from Me to realize! © Demetrios Trifiatis 11 November 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/11/2015 3:16:00 PM
A wonderfully weaved and worded piece my friend.
Login to Reply
Trifiatis Avatar
Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/11/2015 4:53:00 PM
Thank you so much for your heartfelt visit and comment my friend, Tim!
Date: 11/11/2015 12:42:00 PM
So deep and powerful, dear Demetrios:)
Login to Reply
Trifiatis Avatar
Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/11/2015 2:45:00 PM
Thank you dear, Elis, for your kind visit and comment!
Date: 11/11/2015 12:30:00 PM
Demetrios, you have penned a deep and profound message within this write. You appreciate what you have been given. Thanks for sharing this amazing piece. As always excellent job! :-) Alexis 7
Login to Reply
Trifiatis Avatar
Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/11/2015 2:47:00 PM
My dearest, Alexis, how delighted I am to receive your visits and comments! Thank you so much!
Date: 11/11/2015 10:59:00 AM
How thoughtful, my dear poet. I love how you lead us through your voice of reason. :) Beautiful. I haven't been around as much. Yet...I cannot forgo visits with you. Filakia
Login to Reply
Trifiatis Avatar
Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/11/2015 2:49:00 PM
Dearest, Eileen, your visits are very precious to me! Hope you will be back in full swing for you are a wonderful poet and friend! God bless you! Filakia polla!
Date: 11/11/2015 10:55:00 AM
agreeing with you 100 %, demetrios.. what a commanding poetic performance from you... live free and huggs!
Login to Reply
Trifiatis Avatar
Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/11/2015 2:55:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your gracious comment, dear nette and that you agree 100% with me. Ha-ha! Hugs!
Date: 11/11/2015 4:18:00 AM
You Proclaim a rightful truth here Demetrios you have been given certain authority that no one can deny you. Excellent my friend. May God give you the power to overcome with his authority. Blessings my friend.
Login to Reply
Trifiatis Avatar
Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/11/2015 7:00:00 AM
Michael, my brother, thank you once more for your lovely visit and generous comment! God bless you!

Book: Shattered Sighs