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My Fragile Heart

My fragile heart was splintered by shards of glass The trauma of my ex leaving without a word had cut so deeply I didn’t want anyone else in my life My whole world was in T A T T E R S Many months passed and we met on a balmy summer evening in June The attraction was instant … But your huge blue eyes contained a sadness, which mirrored my own Neither of us wanted to make the same mistake again We’d both been hurt before Slowly ever so slowly the bond of trust grew between us And as time passed we became inseparable That Christmas you presented me with a box I was intrigued as it was far too big for a ring Cautiously I opened it Laying on the purple velvet were two identical gold chains … at the end of each chain was a jigsaw piece - they fitted together perfectly! At that moment I knew I’d found my soulmate for life We placed the chains around each-others neck Where they remain to this very day Contest All the Little Pieces Sponsored by Broken Wings 09~14~16
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Merryman Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 4:26 PM
Great write, Jan! I like the part about the chains - so romantic! Congrats on your 2nd place win! Love, Kim
Allison Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 6:09 PM
Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 10:05 AM
Jan, oh such a beautiful and touching poem and so creative. Congratulations on second place in my contest~
Allison Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 6:08 PM
Thanks Constnace I was inspired by your theme:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 7:50 PM
Beautiful, Jan. From life's tattered pieces of loss to jigsaw puzzle pieces that fit and bind together forever...Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 6:08 PM
Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Rowe Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 7:05 PM
Agnes made a brilliant observation that I initially missed at how even the words themselves speak of our tattered edges matching like a jigsaw with someone else's. Beautiful.
Allison Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 7:17 PM
Thanks so much Jesse I thought Agnes's comment was wonderful as I hadn't picked up on that myself - the poem just flowed so easily:-) :-) hugs jan xx
Krampe Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 5:09 PM
Congrats on your win, Jan. I love how you carry through and modify the image of pieces, from splinters and shards to the matching puzzle pieces. Hugs, Agnes
Allison Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 5:12 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment Agnes - I surprise myself with the way my poems turn out in the end:-) hugs jan xx
Dahlusion Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 10:23 AM
So fragile. Bravo Poet! ––))
Allison Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 11:27 AM
Thanks so much Dah:-) hugs Jan xx
Chansarkar Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 9:59 AM
Oh hoe lovely and romantic Jan!Loved it!
Allison Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 10:02 AM
Thanks so much Sara:-) hugs Jan xx
White Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 3:50 AM
Good luck Jan. Make sure nothing tatters for real :) 7
Allison Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 5:48 AM
I've had my heart broken - many of us have, but this is just fiction for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 11:49 PM
This contest was made for you Jan. What a beautiful story you have created in this charming piece ! 7 ; )
Allison Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 5:47 AM
Thanks Connie I hope Constance likes it too:-) hugs Jan xx
Austin Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 3:41 PM
A great romantic happening. So it is true - you CAN go home again. Love, Dave
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 3:54 PM
Thanks Daver I never know where my muse will take me but at least it had a happy ending:-) hugs jan xx
Devonshire Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 1:38 PM
Hi Jan! You really caught my attention quickly with this poem. You describe so well the reluctance to enter a new relationship after feeling those "shards" pierce your heart. I had the opportunity to move on recently, but the feeling you describe made me decide against it. I like the way you ended it with the jigsaw pieces coming together. Very nice!
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 3:13 PM
Welcome back Carolyn I hope you are keeping well. its so lovely to see you here on soup and commenting on my poem - I guess many can relate to the reluctance to enter a new relationship after heartache in the past:-( hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 12:02 PM
Things happen for a reason. great poem Jan
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 12:03 PM
Thanks Tim - just ready your dreamy romantic one too:-) hugs Jan xx
Turner Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 9:31 AM
Almost like a fairy tale romance Jan. I realize it's just a poem but there might be a movie in there somewhere:) Great interpretation of the topic. good luck, Jan:):)
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 9:38 AM
Oh I hope there is a director reading at the moment wouldn't that be amazing she says in her dreams:-) :-) thanks for the lovely comment Daniel:-) hugs Jan xx
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September 14, 2016 at 8:26 AM
great presentation meets the brief and a great poem good luck stephen
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 8:53 AM
Thanks Stephen I hope Constance likes it too:-) hugs Jan xx
Mwangi Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 6:59 AM
wooow this is great. its hard to mend a broken heart but true love always prevails. all the best in contest.
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 7:02 AM
Thanks Marion I'm not sure if it's what the sponsor is after but I have to go with the flow of my muse:-) hugs jan xx
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