My Former Life

He awoke in me
the spirit to be free.
I remember how it was
living a life with no cause.
Nobody seemed to realize
that my life seemed to be over and I felt paralyzed.
I would seep further into darkness and push people away.
It was easier to want them to leave me alone then beg them to stay.
But the day I received Christ saving grace
there was no sadness on Earth I couldn't face.
Receiving love from family was easier to do
when the Love of God is poured in through and through.
Remembering His love for me has lifted my eternal woes
and make me see that thoughts of sadness was nothing but a foe.


Inspired by ~The Lord Has His Arms Wrapped About Me~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/15/2010 11:58:00 AM
I loved this poem when I first read it and am happy to see it in the winners' circle. Well done, Brandee! Congratulations, Carolyn
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Date: 8/15/2010 11:57:00 AM
I loved this poem when I first read it and am happy to see it in the winners' circle. Well done, Brandee! Congratulations, Carolyn
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Date: 8/15/2010 9:00:00 AM
My congratulations Brandee to you on your win in Constance ~ A Rambling Poet's contest "Scavenger Hunt". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2010 8:54:00 AM
Congratulations Brandee, on your win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/15/2010 7:44:00 AM
Congrats Brandee on your winning poem in the Scavenger Hunt contest..with this awesome and amazing write and win to enjoy this happy Sunday..with luv..
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Date: 8/14/2010 9:38:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Brandee
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Date: 9/12/2009 11:03:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem rich in faith, Brandee. You have expressed your feelings so beautifully. GBY always. Love, Robin
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Date: 9/12/2009 8:23:00 AM
we win!
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Date: 9/11/2009 2:59:00 PM
Super write Brandee, thank you for sharing this piece>>James
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Date: 9/10/2009 5:44:00 PM
Love the first two lines, great intro to the poem! Thank you for your beautiful comments on my poem also. ~Trudy~
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Date: 9/10/2009 5:39:00 PM
You are never alone, dear Brandee. Each day is a new beginning. God Bless, and thank you for your kind comments. Lainie
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Date: 9/8/2009 9:53:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Brandee. Keep your faith dear friend throughout life. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/7/2009 3:29:00 PM
So glad that you have received Christ's saving grace Brandee. Keep receiving the love and peace and give Him all the glory. God Bless. Leon
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Date: 9/7/2009 2:43:00 PM
Brandee, you have had an epiphany that will change your life and bring great peace in the years to come. There's a lot of wisdom in this write. Excellently conveyed! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/7/2009 2:26:00 PM
Nice expression of your faith put to pen. Sara
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