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My Foolish Heart

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My foolish heart believed your lies; you took advantage of my trust. Seducing me with flattery; your silver tongue twisted the truth. You took advantage of my trust, wooing my heart with promises. Your silver tongue twisted the truth; love was merely a game to you. Wooing my heart with promises; hope led me down a rabbit hole. Love was merely a game to you; feelings never came into play. Hope led me down a rabbit hole; trust tricked me into loving you. Feelings never came into play; each step choreographed by lust. Trust tricked me into loving you, seducing me with flattery. Each step, choreographed by lust; my foolish heart believed your lies.

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Meghan Hutchings

Date: 4/7/2022 7:11:00 PM

Congratulations, Emile! Your poem sounds like a replay of almost every relationship I've had! I can especially relate to your line "Each move choreographed by lust". Well done! God bless and much love...Meghan

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/8/2022 6:16:00 AM

Thanks, Meghan, don't give up on love, it is trying to find you as well. I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/7/2022 10:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win Emile. You have articulated this age old experience so wonderfully! Blessings!

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/7/2022 12:26:00 PM

Thanks so much, Sam, I appreciate all of your input, my friend, Emile.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/5/2022 10:46:00 AM

Far too common a problem in hindsight, Emile... Congrats! well written!

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/5/2022 3:11:00 PM

Thanks, James, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Terry Miller

Date: 4/5/2022 2:00:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine win, well dserved.

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/5/2022 7:25:00 AM

Thanks, Terry, I appreciate all of your comments, my friend, Emile.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/4/2022 10:40:00 PM

"silver tongue", "love was only a game", "choreographed by lust" - Wow! Worthy of best awards! Congratulations!

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/5/2022 7:24:00 AM

Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 4/4/2022 9:18:00 PM

A familiar tale in each of our lives, so artistically emoted by a bleeding heart. Congrats on your top win, Emile!

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/5/2022 7:24:00 AM

Thanks, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Beata Agustin

Date: 4/4/2022 8:10:00 PM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/5/2022 7:23:00 AM

Thanks, Beata, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/4/2022 6:03:00 PM

Great Pantoum form , Emile, lovely write.. Congratulations on your win. Blessings my dear friend

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/5/2022 7:23:00 AM

Thanks, Eve, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Ann Peck

Date: 4/4/2022 5:19:00 PM

Beautifully penned, Emile. I think a Pantoum cannot be an easy one to write! "...love's light blinded my sight..." so often true. Congratulations on your First Place Win!

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/5/2022 7:22:00 AM

Thanks, Ann, a Pantoum can be a bit tricky to write, but I'm sure you are up to it., you should give it a try, my friend, Emile.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/4/2022 4:07:00 PM

Hello Emile, Congratulations on your win. This is filled with heartbreak and pain. Of a love that went wrong. Enjoy your evening my friend. Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/5/2022 12:45:00 PM

Hello Emile, yes I had a wonderful weekend. thank you. I hope you did to. You are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. Emile. Darlene

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/4/2022 4:45:00 PM

Thanks, Darlene, I appreciate your comments, have a wonderful week my friend, Emile.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/4/2022 1:47:00 PM

Emile, congratulations on your first place win. Wonderful pantoum. Blessings!

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/4/2022 4:44:00 PM

Thanks, Sam, I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.