My Foolish Heart

How my mind as that of a child Frivolous and foolish seeks solace In a fictitious world of make believe While reality, like a fiend stares right on my face! Waiting for none, the globe continues to spin And seasons arrive and depart without default Yet how I wish to think, With my exit, the world will come to an abrupt halt When I am gone and lie cold under the sod And my memory no more lingers How my foolish heart desires to feel My absence continually injures Gains and losses when added up Weighs equal on life’s dispassionate balance Yet how I intend to boast foolishly~ With success alone, I ever had my alliance Though I never reached the peak I sought And faltered on my way distraught How foolishly I try to console myself That I got everything for which I had fought Future awaits me with gloom and gaiety And victory is certain to follow defeat Yet how foolishly in my heart, I long to proclaim Here is one for whom life shall ever be a treat! Placed eighth April.4.2022 My Foolish Heart Cash Prize Poetry Contest Sponsor- L Milton Hawkins
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Date: 4/7/2022 7:45:00 PM
Congratulations, Valsa! Your poem is beautiful and powerful! I love how with any dismal emotion, you added hope and positivity into your well-crafted poem to balance it out. Your poems are always heartwarming! Wonderful job!! God bless and much love...Meghan!
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Date: 4/7/2022 11:58:00 AM
Valsa, congratulations on your win! You have an amazing ability to weave words into stunning poetic expression - "in a fictitious world of make believe" is just one example of your gift my friend. Thank you for so generously sharing this gift with us who love your writing that is so inspiring! Blessings!
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Date: 4/6/2022 5:51:00 AM
I agree with you Valsa - life allows us to learn and to express our innermost thoughts and ideas through the medium of poetry,and the joy I get from writing is a certain passion and perhaps a little bit of an obsession. Enjoyed your poem very much and wish you a very long and healthy Life along with writing your lovely gems in your insanely beautiful poetic style..CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Date: 4/5/2022 2:07:00 AM
Coming back to congratulate you, Valsa, well deserved.
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Date: 4/4/2022 10:58:00 PM
"fictitious world of make believe", "my foolish heart desires to feel" - The whole poem is great. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/4/2022 1:53:00 PM
Congratulation on your win, Valsa outstanding write. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 4/4/2022 1:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A powerful write. Life is not always easy. Have a blessed day...................
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Date: 4/4/2022 1:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest, "My Foolish Heart," Valsa. I enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 4/16/2022 12:40:00 AM
Thanks a lot Milton for the chance given and the placement got !
Date: 4/4/2022 8:00:00 AM
Thought-provoking and profound, Valsa:)
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Date: 4/4/2022 7:45:00 AM
This is amazing "Though I never reached the peak I sought And faltered on my way distraught How foolishly I try to console myself That I got everything for which I had fought"
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Date: 4/4/2022 5:38:00 AM
Intriguing write... All my best for your win. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 4/4/2022 5:13:00 AM
Insightful write, Valsa. Many splendid thoughts of honest introspection that reflect on call of heart. Excellent write.
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Date: 4/4/2022 1:57:00 AM
Ooh, I do love this; such a treat to read. Surely a winner here.
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Date: 4/4/2022 12:11:00 AM
Dispite all the ups and downs in our life, life is always a treat, thought provoking verse Valsa. Enjoy your week ahead. Tom
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Date: 4/3/2022 11:33:00 PM
I first said, your honesty & vulnerability, make you a Bold Pietess intimating The Hunan Condition. Our desire for Fame has a deep msg about Eternal Life
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Date: 4/3/2022 11:31:00 PM
My comments are eaten at almost every 3 view. Loved it, valsa
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Date: 4/3/2022 11:27:00 PM
Someday when you'll be gone, your wonderful poetry will live forever. All your verses are great and worthy of a second and even a third reading. Best for a win. A Fave.
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