My Foolish Heart

I thought I had all I needed,
I rested on my oar, 
I thought all had been mended,
I had everything to soar.

Naïve and inexperienced I was,
Someone had to put me through,
It was a different battlefield and the wars,
Were not what I thought was true.

The instructions came at the eleventh hour,
Nothing much to salvage, 
I couldn’t be pulled up the tower, 
I had caused permeable damage.

I fought to get back on my feet,
All was to no avail,
There were a plethora of requirements to meet, 
I ran but didn’t entirely prevail.

I have laboured for others,
Gave all my time and left my desires, 
Opportunities came but like toddlers, 
I didn’t see the current flowing through the wires.

I'm on a full-scale run,
Before the door closes on my turn.



April 2, 2022.
My Foolish Heart Cash Prize Poetry Contest.
L. Milton Hankins.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 4/3/2022 5:14:00 AM
"I have laboured for others, Gave all my time and left my desires," Sometimes this happens ! Leaving aside our leisure and our comforts, we strain for others who fail to even acknowledge what we did for them. Then we realize our foolishness with a jolt! Profound thoughts, Thompson !
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