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My Foolish Heart

You left me long ago but it seems like yesterday. I can still hear the music of your parting words but honest, I’m not waiting your return, but my heart doesn’t understand. The words you sweetly uttered, do you remember? “I love you” are etched deep within my soul, and my heart wants to hear those words again, but you’re no longer near me. The shadows on the pregnant moon are like your raven hair that used to lay upon my chest, so don’t think I want you back it’s just my foolish heart, that keeps on beating. Perhaps I should make it stop.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/7/2018 9:28:00 PM
Sadly beautiful...
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 12/8/2018 9:26:00 AM
Thanks for visiting.
Date: 12/2/2018 1:14:00 PM
Great emotion!
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 12/2/2018 4:19:00 PM
Thank you for your comments Kim.
Date: 12/2/2018 1:00:00 PM
Excellent write..very well done, Carlos.
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 12/2/2018 4:18:00 PM
Thank you Vijay.
Date: 12/2/2018 11:35:00 AM
Carlos, a deeply moving write of love and longing, well done
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 12/2/2018 11:49:00 AM
You are vey kind. Thank you.

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