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Musing with Caren Krutsinger’s musings. I love our dear poet’s imagination. Thank you, Caren for allowing me to use your poem and a few phrases from your poem. Used poem by permission. My Food Flees from Me Caren, A creepy thing I would devour But wait, wait, wait… not fuzzy wuzzy in the drain; are you insane?! Tickly tasty, i won’t wasty, wiggles and waggles - the hashtag “what am i thinking?!” I watch it move - stomach’s sinking. My food flees from me…that might be just what i need! Don’t be hasty - tastes like cookie? My brain reacts like a rookie. Cookie doesn’t slide nor slither on my pink tongue. I’m persnickety and picky, quite realize this snack is icky. Though your friendship i encourage, i’ve no courage for bugs that bathe in the sink or crawl on the floor. I need shrink! No! No! No bugs at all, my friend. My skin’s crawling, as i’m spitting out the thought. I’ll eat good things, as i’ve been taught. 4/28/2023 Find Your PS Muse Sponsor: Margarita Lillico Not as Picky as I Thought She Was If I was hungry I would devour that creepy thing I think. It is something tasty that crawled out of my sink You don’t even know what it is my friend says. She is persnickety and picky, my pal Inez. Look at its legs, I reply. They look tickly tasty. Not so fast! Says the crawler. Let’s not be hasty! Inez says “I never eat food that speaks to me.” “I will make an exception,” I say, “That thing is free.” Inez is not as choosy as I thought that she was. I begin bathing the sink creature, fluffing his fuzz. "Wait!" the crawly thing says. “That brush is too short for me!” The second I stop, he scuttles down the drain to flee. Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 5/5/2023 4:52:00 PM
Hey, this is so cute and it made me smile.:) I liked your writing style.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2023 6:03:00 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 5/4/2023 9:56:00 AM
What a playful poem. It makes cookies almost unappetizing. I'm reminded of something Siddhartha said, "From eating meat arrogance is born, from arrogance erroneous imaginations issue, and from imagination is born greed..." This flea would almost want to eat the good things I'm taught if only it wasn't so tasty.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2023 12:58:00 PM
LOL! Thanks for a fun comment!
Date: 5/4/2023 3:29:00 AM
- Friendship poem ... lovely, Kim & Caren :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2023 12:59:00 PM
Thank you and for recognizing Caren as well!!
Date: 5/3/2023 9:40:00 PM
I love collaborations. Shows real friendship,
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2023 12:59:00 PM
Thank you, Victor! Blessings, dear friend!
Date: 5/3/2023 9:25:00 PM
Nice entry for the contest, Kim. I love the word, "persnickety". Good luck my friend. Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2023 1:00:00 PM
Thank you, Bill! Best to you! Be plucky and persnickety;)
Date: 5/3/2023 8:32:00 PM
I enjoyed both poems immensely, Kim. I particularly loved the ending to both poems. Best wishes for the contest. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2023 1:00:00 PM
Thank you and for recognizing both of us!
Date: 5/3/2023 1:24:00 PM
What a cute/fun write. Good Luck. Have a great day.............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2023 2:24:00 PM
Thank you, Paula! Bounced off dear Caren’s humor :)

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