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My Fondest Memory

It was July when I watched an elderly man Lounging on the same bench to gather his thoughts, As fingers picked worn-out notes…bowing low Seemingly atoning for his charmed one’s teardrops, done: In the fringe of nightfall, I began my warm approach While this stranger rolled on, hoping dreaming His wife were around… a tired soul in need of love. Every time I asked why, the old man shrugged, “ Because, because”--- his voice trailing off While we counted young stars on flight above… His face mildly glowed from the sheen Of moonlight: from his pocket, another letter blew, Signed by his dear Roselyn, with a litany of praise For a woman who cherished all their moments Through rain and silence: how the fondness In his eyes brought me to embrace My own tears after my Mama kissed the clouds, Same month as this… unknowingly, He buzzed a tune Roselyn and Mom adored, As if fate allowed us to drench in floats of serendipity. My Fondest Memory: Frank Herrera 12/14/2016
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Godwin Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 3:13 AM
WOW that was dramatic! and powerful, just loved it! Congrats ... CayCay
Kundu Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 1:02 AM
This a great write, Nette. Every line, every word oozes emotion. Congrats on the win.
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December 15, 2016 at 6:38 AM
This really tugs at the heartstrings Nette, beautifully rendered.
Vinson Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 9:33 PM
A special moment, communicated incandescently. : )
Y. Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 3:57 PM
I agree with Janis, this was a deeply and moving write. Congratulations on your fine win. It was deserved: -) Alexis
Medders Tobechi Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 2:46 PM
Deeply moving. Congratulations on your placement.
Allison Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 2:18 PM
absolutely stunning Nette this touched my heart:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
White Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 12:15 PM
Ohhhh, this takes my breath away, it is sooo beautiful. Nette, I see myself sitting there, listening and talking, wionderful. Congratulations :)
Oimbo Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 7:06 AM
this is a fine creative work
Krampe Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 6:27 PM
A beautiful memory, beautifully told. Good luck in the contest.
Parker Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 6:14 PM
the ability to touch our hearts with such a story and with such gentle clarity is truly a beautiful gift
Green Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 4:58 PM
Absolutely beautiful and heart touching Nette. This was like watching a Hallmark channel movie. Once again, absolutely beautiful.
Datu Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 4:42 PM
The vulnerable connection of two people from different worlds makes this radiant poem astoundingly tender! I am a sucker for destiny!
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December 13, 2016 at 4:39 PM
Beautiful
Turner Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 3:10 PM
A sad memory, beautifully expressed as only you can, nette.
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