My Fondest Memory

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It was July when I watched an elderly man Lounging on the same bench to gather his thoughts, As fingers picked worn-out notes…bowing low Seemingly atoning for his charmed one’s teardrops, done: In the fringe of nightfall, I began my warm approach While this stranger rolled on, hoping dreaming His wife were around… a tired soul in need of love. Every time I asked why, the old man shrugged, “ Because, because”--- his voice trailing off While we counted young stars on flight above… His face mildly glowed from the sheen Of moonlight: from his pocket, another letter blew, Signed by his dear Roselyn, with a litany of praise For a woman who cherished all their moments Through rain and silence: how the fondness In his eyes brought me to embrace My own tears after my Mama kissed the clouds, Same month as this… unknowingly, He buzzed a tune Roselyn and Mom adored, As if fate allowed us to drench in floats of serendipity. My Fondest Memory: Frank Herrera 12/14/2016

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Date: 12/18/2016 3:13:00 AM
WOW that was dramatic! and powerful, just loved it! Congrats ... CayCay
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Date: 12/18/2016 1:02:00 AM
This a great write, Nette. Every line, every word oozes emotion. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 12/15/2016 6:38:00 AM
This really tugs at the heartstrings Nette, beautifully rendered.
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Date: 12/14/2016 9:33:00 PM
A special moment, communicated incandescently. : )
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Date: 12/14/2016 3:57:00 PM
I agree with Janis, this was a deeply and moving write. Congratulations on your fine win. It was deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 12/14/2016 2:46:00 PM
Deeply moving. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 12/14/2016 2:18:00 PM
absolutely stunning Nette this touched my heart:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/14/2016 12:15:00 PM
Ohhhh, this takes my breath away, it is sooo beautiful. Nette, I see myself sitting there, listening and talking, wionderful. Congratulations :)
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Date: 12/14/2016 7:06:00 AM
this is a fine creative work
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Date: 12/13/2016 6:27:00 PM
A beautiful memory, beautifully told. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/13/2016 6:14:00 PM
the ability to touch our hearts with such a story and with such gentle clarity is truly a beautiful gift
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Date: 12/13/2016 4:58:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful and heart touching Nette. This was like watching a Hallmark channel movie. Once again, absolutely beautiful.
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Date: 12/13/2016 4:42:00 PM
The vulnerable connection of two people from different worlds makes this radiant poem astoundingly tender! I am a sucker for destiny!
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Date: 12/13/2016 4:39:00 PM
Beautiful
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Date: 12/13/2016 3:58:00 PM
Sometimes, fond memories come from strangers who are like-minded souls. A jewel of a radiant poesy!
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Date: 12/13/2016 3:10:00 PM
A sad memory, beautifully expressed as only you can, nette.
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