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Gramps George Morris was my Gramps, a real fine man. He was a Poitier or Cary Grant. We went to the Island they call Coney, and on his back, I’d ride the giant waves. I’d laugh so hard he’d feel my stomach shake. Which made him give almost a slight "Ha, Ha" He said, ‘’You need to close your mouth real tight, or you will end up with a lunch of sea.'' Upon his back I waited for the next. It was a wave as big as all that day. I closed my mouth as we sailed straight to shore, and when it broke we both loosed "Ha Ha Ha." How nice it was to share, just he and I, the surf, the sand, the ocean and sea air. My first time at a Raw Bar eating clams, fond traces of the good times that we had. 12/8/16

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Date: 12/14/2016 3:53:00 PM
Hi Janis, What a wonderful memory. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 12/14/2016 10:18:00 PM
Thanks, Alexis.
Date: 12/14/2016 3:48:00 PM
this is just wonderful, Janis. Glad I finally saw it and congrats on a great win.
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Date: 12/14/2016 10:19:00 PM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 12/14/2016 2:22:00 PM
A lovely tribute thanks for sharing your precious memory:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/14/2016 3:35:00 PM
Thanks, Jan.
Date: 12/14/2016 12:43:00 PM
This is so lovely, you and your graNDFATHER AND Coney Island. He sounds like a wonderful man. Congratulations :)
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Date: 12/14/2016 10:21:00 PM
He was really a great person, veteran of WW2 and all.
Date: 12/10/2016 1:40:00 AM
Hi Janis, love this little poem which I can relate to, I used to spend lot of time with my gramps until my parents dragged us out to Australia, but I do remember wonderful times with both him and my Gran, thank you for bringing back some memories and take care.......Vera
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Date: 12/10/2016 6:04:00 PM
Vera, I am so glad that this touched a memory for you. Nothing can replace the times we spent with our grandparents.

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