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My Fondest Memory

MY FONDEST MEMORY The two of us, diving into that wooden chest Looking for that one dress, that one vest That one large hat of straw Those high heeled shoes with buckles of gold In our eyes there was no flaw Nothing cheap, it was a treasure to hold I was the damsel in distress She my saviour of noblesse She wrote the words I had to say A true director on Broadway With everlasting patience And seriously watching every move Paid attention to my cadence In her eyes I saw when she approved My far too long gown conceals My stumbling on those high heels In the dark circumstances of my years This memory shone bright as day And saved me in every way I am still here, smiling through my tears. *** December 7, 2016 1st place in contest: My fondest memory Sponsor: Frank Herrera.
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Roberts Avatar
January 27, 2017 at 8:46 PM
<3 superb
White Avatar
January 27, 2017 at 10:07 PM
Thank you!
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 1:43 PM
Thanks for sharing your personal experience with us. It's beautiful piece of true poetry.
White Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 2:10 PM
Thank you so much for the compliment, Newton :)
Godwin Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 3:16 AM
THIS IS EXCEPTIONALLY GOOD WRITING! I AM BLESSED TO HAVE BEEN LED HERE, DARREN - THIS POEM SHINES IN EMOTION, it touches deep with poetic wave after poetic wave and I'm poetry-adrenaline awed at the moment, like a great rush ... CayCay WOW and congrats
White Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 3:48 AM
Thanks so much CayCay :) I am so happy you like it.
Kundu Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 1:03 AM
Darren, this is in the league of its own. Amazing, amazing write. Congrats on the win.
White Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 1:09 AM
Tamal, thank you! I am proud of it :)
Wolf Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 2:23 AM
A superb win with a great piece my friend
White Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 2:53 AM
Thanks so much my friend :)
Vinson Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 9:26 PM
Tender and touching, Darren. : )
White Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 11:08 PM
It's such a dear memory of my sister and myself :) Thanks Doug.
Jackson Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 7:09 PM
Congrats for being #1 a beautiful well written poem
White Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 10:57 PM
Thank you, Patrice :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 3:50 PM
Yes, this one is SO deserving of top win. I recall it as one of the most creative of the bunch. Congrats, Darren
White Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 10:56 PM
Aww Andrea, such great compliment, thank you :)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 2:44 PM
Darren, I love how this is written in a fondness of mind. A 7 for me. Congratulations on 1st place. This poem is entitled.
White Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 2:48 PM
Janis, thank you so much, a 7, lovely :)
Murray Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 1:49 PM
Now I have tears Darren. Mothers always know their children...inside out. This is just an amazing poem. The way I like it. Straight from the heart. What a lucky boy you were.
White Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 2:35 PM
Ouch! Painful :)
Murray Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 11:24 AM
Your sister?? Even better!! My sister and I dived into a wooden tea chest full of old shoes. We both settled on a pair of white sandals. The push and pull that resulted ended up with the scar she still bears above her right eye. She let go and tripped into the range nearby.Oops...
White Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 1:52 PM
Thank you Jean. Yes straight from my heart.
Allison Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 1:14 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Darren:-) hugs jan xx
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December 14, 2016 at 1:16 PM
Thanks Jan :)
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December 14, 2016 at 12:05 PM
congrats on your win deserved accolades for young darren as frank would say great poem
White Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Oh! Really! I hadn't seen that yet :D That is so wonderful, Thank you Stephen!
Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 8:09 PM
wow, Darren. this is just wonderful!! So believable and sincere.
White Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 10:18 PM
Thanks Andrea, it is a true memory, and very lively in my mind :)
P  Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 7:31 AM
I adore this Darren, such charmed reminisces! 7+
White Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 7:50 AM
Awww, Paloma! 7+ Thank you!! :)
Polydoro Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 10:28 PM
Such beautiful memories to have and hold. a sweet poem, Darren <3
White Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 10:45 PM
Yep Claudia :) It is a real, true memory, and I cherish it. <3
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December 7, 2016 at 9:42 PM
"The two of us, diving into that wooden chest/ Looking for that one dress, that one vest..." Darren: this is a great poem with excellent rhyme and I ESPECIALLY love these opening lines. These lines really set the tone of the rest of the piece. Well done and thank you for sharing. -- Wesley C.
White Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 10:19 PM
Wesley, THANK you :) I am glad you love the rhyme, it was kind of hard to do.
Haight Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 7:25 PM
Amazing memories to hold on to, Darren, beautifully expressed in this lovely poem. Sandra
White Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 9:32 PM
I hold these memories in my heart Sandra, thank you :)
Allison Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 4:18 PM
a real trip down memory Lane Darren:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
White Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 9:31 PM
I always love the expression "Memory Lane", we don't have an equivalent here :) Thanks Jan xx
Green Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 4:14 PM
This was very well done and took us down a path of memories with you. Good luck in the contest.
White Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 9:30 PM
Thanks Chris, we'll see what happens in the contest
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