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My Fly Buzzes Off

the flowers smile iridescent fly an airplane competes summer day magic in state of Kansas my fly buzzes off

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Date: 6/26/2019 2:19:00 PM
Caren, your imagination has no limits - i love this write - fly and plane compete - flytastic! Hugs and Blessings Jennifer.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/26/2019 8:49:00 PM
thank you Jennifer. I was sitting in the sun just throwing down thoughts and this is what happened.
Date: 6/25/2019 8:57:00 PM
I love the line, 'an airplane competes.' It's just so funny, yet so real, so, so, so CAREN! Yea!!! :) gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/26/2019 8:50:00 PM
Thank you GW. I appreciate it! For sure. This has been such a sad month. I am spending more time in the sun, trying to revive myself to life again.

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