My Flannel Shirt

You standing there looking so innocent
       and sexy, biting your lip
Smiling so guile-y and your hair
Cascading around your face
Over your shoulders and styled by JBF
You standing a bit awkwardly your legs
      falling from my flannel shirt
And smooth as hell, your feet up on the balls
      as if in high heels
Flexing in anticipation and a devilish grin
With a "What me?" delectation  
It's not a skirt it's my flannel shirt
And you with your post coital giggle
A splash of bawdy and a hint of naughty
      and looking muy caliente
With my eyes I take you in as you take 
      my breath away
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De Beaulieu Avatar
February 5, 2025 at 10:30 AM
Hello Michael Ramel, I do agree with Brandy. Eenjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 10, 2025 at 9:52 AM
Hello Michael, you are welcome. Enjoy your day. /Darlene/
Ramel Avatar
February 9, 2025 at 1:44 PM
Thanks Darlene
Nicole Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 3:14 PM
Soft, sensual and seductive are your thoughts. A woman wearing a flannel shirt is sexy and playful. Not to mention, it's comfortable. I think so, anyway. I'm blushing after reading your words. :) Brandy
Ramel Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 10:58 AM
Thanks for blushing Brandy....yes there is a specific moment when my (then) girlfriend wore my flannel shirt and OH BOY! (or should I say OH GIRL!)
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