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My Five Senses

My Five Senses (in first grade) At Jefferson was my first grade, and so much was appealing. My senses were reeling because of new things I was feeling. My teacher taught great songs to sing. Such a honeyed voice had she! I’d raise my hand up just to hear her dulcetly call on me. At recess time we’d go outside, and there was a boy out there. His face was so cute, I’d just wait. . . When he looked away, I’d stare. Those times that we created art, we used a big jar of paste. When no one saw, I’d eat a glob of it! I enjoyed its taste! When lunch time came, we went to the cafeteria; my nose delighted in the smell of foods which on the air round us rose. That boy I saw on the playground. How I longed to touch his hand. Years passed; another held my hand - that touch a sensation grand. Some things that pleased my senses then are gone, yet I still recall how wonderful they made me feel and how much I loved them all. Aug 9, 2018 for Viv Wigley's Five Senses Poetry Contest

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Date: 8/21/2018 3:18:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara
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Date: 8/16/2018 10:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 8/15/2018 7:54:00 PM
Such a lovely way to describe your 'senses', Andrea. Many of us can identify with the imagery in your well-written poem. Congrats on your Podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/14/2018 3:45:00 PM
Yay Andrea! I knew he would like this entry! I'm so happy to see it in the top three! Congratulations my friend. I finally made his list too. ; ) xxoo
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Date: 8/14/2018 10:21:00 AM
I love how you reached into the past .....to your grammar school days, and couldn't help but laugh at our 'shared' experiences. Loved it !! Congrats on your deserved win, Andrea!!
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Date: 8/14/2018 9:51:00 AM
Love this! Congrats, Andrea! Janice
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Date: 8/14/2018 9:06:00 AM
A child’s senses on full alert! How wondrous (and dangerous) a time! Congrats, Andrea!
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Date: 8/10/2018 4:28:00 PM
A great entry Andrea! It took me back to when I was that age...when life was much more care free. I love the line about you eating the glue. Lol. I am sure he will enjoy it as I did. Hugs, Connie : )
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Date: 8/10/2018 10:17:00 AM
You tackled all five senses by taking us back in time, Andrea. That glob of paste reminds me of when we were given small toothpaste tubes at school and some children squeezed out the paste and ate it...perhaps they thought it was some kind of sweet! Regards // paul
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Date: 8/10/2018 7:29:00 AM
I like the way you incorporated the senses in your splendid memories without being obvious about them..your skills shine, Andrea...you will win with this poem.
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Date: 8/10/2018 3:22:00 AM
wonderful memories Andrea I loved the part about the paste ... I never ate it but loved the smell of 'copydex' ad we'd put it on our hands and peel it off when it dried ... oh what memories you have bought back:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/10/2018 2:12:00 AM
Lovely to look back Andrea at the happy times of long ago. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 8/9/2018 10:15:00 PM
You took the poem to school...seem like you had a good time...one that pleases you...it shows all over it...All the best Andrea
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Date: 8/9/2018 9:20:00 PM
great for the contest.,I enjoyed reading hugs eve
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