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MY FIVE SENSES In bygone days, when I was but a lad of six, I can vividly recall the smell of fresh homemade biscuits baked in a wood burning stove. As we all gathered around the breakfast table, we all bowed our heads and Pa -- as we called our loving Daddy, would say the Blessing. The warmth of the kitchen, especially on cold mornings, was always a welcome feeling. We would all take a biscuit, still hot from the oven, slather it with freshly churned butter, pour homemade Georgia cane syrup on it and feel like we had died and gone to Heaven. Unless you have never been privy to this experience, you will not be able to feel about it as I do. But the touch, smell, and taste of those biscuits brings back memories that cause me to envision Ma -- as we called our loving Mama, sitting at her place at the table smiling proudly as we literally devoured every single biscuit before heading out to do chores before the school bus came. All of this took place after we heard the rooster crowing to announce the coming sunrise. Even now, after all the years that have passed, Ma, Pa, and our younger brother are deceased but both my sisters and I still recall, with a mingling of laughter and tears the joy we shared so many years ago. 25 July 2018 For the contest sponsored by Viv Wigley

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Date: 8/21/2018 3:16:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 8/21/2018 5:33:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! It is always good to hear from you. We've been 'Soup Friends' for a number of years and you have always been kind and supportive of my work. I appreciate it so much.
Date: 8/16/2018 10:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Great memories, reminded me of a few too. Well done!
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Date: 8/16/2018 10:49:00 PM
Memories are what legends and legacies are made of. Glad you enjoyed it Susan.
Date: 8/14/2018 4:32:00 PM
This brought tears to my eyes Curtis. Memories like this are golden! I loved your entry and am so happy to see it received a high placement! Congratulations! : )
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 8/16/2018 10:48:00 PM
Connie, what a great feeling to know that my poem brought tears to your eyes. I say that not as uncaring, but flattered and honored. I've never been paid such an open, sincere compliment. Thank you for that and your happiness in its high placement.
Date: 7/25/2018 5:01:00 PM
Very nice poem. I enjoyed this :) Thanks for sharing.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 7/25/2018 7:19:00 PM
Thank you Heidi. I'm glad you enjoyed it. These are real memories from my past, unlike some of my most recent poems that read like true events.
Date: 7/25/2018 4:42:00 PM
Ain't nothin' like them big old cat head biscuits and some gravy or some homemade jelly. This one almost had me teary eyed, Curtis. All of my family has passed on so I have no one to share those memories with.
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 7/25/2018 7:17:00 PM
Yes, Daniel, you're so right --- about the biscuits and the memories. This story is one of my true ones. I'm sorry to hear that all your family has passed on but let me assure you that you can feel free to share any of those memories with me. I love hearing stories from people's past. Also, I'd like to thank you for your support.
Date: 7/25/2018 4:10:00 PM
lovely verse Curtis, and lovely memories you have too. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 7/25/2018 3:55:00 PM
Absolutely a joy to read Curtis, you bought the scene to life with such vivid imagery i could almost taste those biscuits:-) hugs jan xx
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