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My First Villanelle

Why do I survive in a world so cruel? I'd like a life without war. Why should I remain a fool? Why should I obey the rule? I'd like to relive the before. Why would I remain in that pool? Must I stay where angels ridicule? I'd like passage through the door. To places where demon's fire fuel. Must I dwell where troubles make full? Of me, I'd like to leave the floor. And fly up high the clouds of wool. What can I do to the handful? Of melancholy pressed firmly to the core. Agony and pain in a mystic whirlpool. What can I do about the misrule? Of power placed at sights I abhor. Or might coiled in a bad spool. Of strength drained in a world so cruel.

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Date: 6/24/2023 10:53:00 PM
Life is an ever changing circus, staying alive feels like an award, love the poem, great work. Thanks for sharing ??
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Date: 9/1/2022 7:17:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." The Lord's blessings be with you. (Please check with Poetry Soup about the definition of Villanelle.)
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