Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Poet Limerick

My First Love

Got my first car when I was sixteen
The coolest blue car I had ever seen
A hot rod fuel injected  
My foot to floor connected
I’m surprised I lived to seventeen

I loved my Datsun 280 z
A birthday gift from my parents to me
Drove it for eight long years
When I sold it, I cried tears
To this day, I still miss my baby


*My first car was a 1976 Datsun 280z

By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
for the My First Car Contest (Carol Brown)
second place

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Andrea Dietrich April 15, 2013 at 6:21 PM rhonda,your poem Night Spell would be a great entry for my Faves contest. I am trying to help poet out,the ones who did not make my first Fave contest list. Luv, Andrea

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 13, 2012 at 2:02 PM Congratulations Rhonda, well done xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 13, 2012 at 12:58 PM congrats Rhonda on a grand win for this exciting entry on your first car .. I do remember those Datsuns luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown March 13, 2012 at 7:11 AM Congratulations on your win and thank you for supporting "My First Car" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol

Sashi Prabhu March 1, 2012 at 1:38 AM wooohoooo.... a gr8 entry for the constest..best wishes........~sashi

Andrea Dietrich February 29, 2012 at 11:01 PM well, yours sounds like it was a heckuva lot better than mine. I really like this and also how you told me about your car in the comment you made to me. I hope this does well in the contest. Andrea