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My First Limerick Banger

My first car was green , red and black . Part Nissan , Jeep and Cadillac . When you pulled out the choke The boot filled with smoke Flames farting straight out the back . I called it my old Batmobile Made of plastic , old planks and steel . It was loved by weird gooks And Hazardy Dukes But with Babes , had little appeal . For Chantelle's "Gas" contest ..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/17/2015 7:01:00 AM
Funny Sean, nice write.
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Date: 12/20/2014 7:23:00 AM
This is superb humour Sean - I can't wait to delve into some more of your writes:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/24/2012 1:27:00 PM
Good day Sean: I like this poem. The line in which you called the car "my old Batmobile" made me laugh. Have a great day.
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Date: 4/6/2012 1:01:00 PM
yup this is limeric flavor.
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Date: 3/14/2012 8:43:00 PM
YES YES, it is high on the list, well kind of high, and it sure deserved a win, CONGRATULATIONS, my great limerick friend.
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Date: 3/13/2012 1:54:00 PM
Congratulations Sean, well done xx
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Date: 3/13/2012 12:51:00 PM
congrats Sean on a grand win for this super cool Limerick on this dashing car luv.. nice to see u on winners list ..
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Date: 3/13/2012 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and thank you for supporting "My First Car" contest Sean. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/6/2012 10:31:00 PM
Hey, I think it sounded like GREAT fun. Old Batmobile. how cool. I sure miss you here and now it is fun to see you writing a limerick again.
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Date: 3/6/2012 1:58:00 PM
love it , best of luck in the contest, you have soup mail
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Date: 3/4/2012 8:49:00 AM
sean, ha great limerick...thanks for the funny poem...pd
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Date: 3/3/2012 1:36:00 PM
Funny one Sean....:) - love it...luck to you in contest!!! - oxox Anne-Lise :)
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