Sean Kelly Poet Limerick

My First Limerick Banger

My first car was green , red and black .

 Part Nissan , Jeep and Cadillac .

 When you pulled out the choke 

 The boot filled with smoke

 Flames farting straight out the back .


 I called it my old Batmobile 

 Made of plastic , old planks and  steel .

 It was loved by weird gooks

 And Hazardy Dukes

 But with Babes , had little appeal .



For Chantelle's "Gas" contest ..

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James Inman November 17, 2015 at 7:01 AM Funny Sean, nice write.

Jan Allison December 20, 2014 at 7:23 AM This is superb humour Sean - I can't wait to delve into some more of your writes:-) Hugs jan xx

Sheol Moribund November 24, 2012 at 1:27 PM Good day Sean: I like this poem. The line in which you called the car "my old Batmobile" made me laugh. Have a great day.

Andrea Dietrich March 14, 2012 at 8:43 PM YES YES, it is high on the list, well kind of high, and it sure deserved a win, CONGRATULATIONS, my great limerick friend.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 13, 2012 at 1:54 PM Congratulations Sean, well done xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 13, 2012 at 12:51 PM congrats Sean on a grand win for this super cool Limerick on this dashing car luv.. nice to see u on winners list ..

Carol Sunshine Brown March 13, 2012 at 7:02 AM Congratulations on your win and thank you for supporting "My First Car" contest Sean. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2012 at 10:31 PM Hey, I think it sounded like GREAT fun. Old Batmobile. how cool. I sure miss you here and now it is fun to see you writing a limerick again.

Francine Roberts March 6, 2012 at 1:58 PM love it , best of luck in the contest, you have soup mail

Poet Destroyer A March 4, 2012 at 8:49 AM sean, ha great limerick...thanks for the funny poem...pd

Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2012 at 1:36 PM Funny one Sean....:) - love it...luck to you in contest!!! - oxox Anne-Lise :)