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My Final Curtain

No encore demanded, I stand alone No applause as I hang up my ‘microphone’ But what do they care, for no empty chair Has ever acknowledged good tone I took to this stage in a different age I think then, the Stones were the rage Yet, I’ve appeared here, daily for years And sung like a songbird uncaged But this, my last bow, arthritic now Elicits no ‘Bravo’ or ‘Wow’ I gave it my best, my stage put to rest A field I can no longer plough For fifty years hired, tomorrow retired This caretaker? No longer required So thanks for the chance, to sing and to dance Enacting the dreams I desired My time to go, my time to rest The silence now, inside my chest Applause resounds, my lights go down I take my leave, where I lived best

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/26/2019 6:59:00 PM
Sad for the final curtain to go down on this act - especially when them darn Stones are still at it . . . : (
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Indiana Shaw
Date: 11/27/2019 2:51:00 PM
Not at all, it was made quite clear in the 4th verse, I was as lost as you to some comments made, so just went with the flow, the thought of the caretaker stood on a empty stage provokes a lot of imaginary, perhaps his last night was spent singing "I did it my way" with a tear in his eye . . .
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/27/2019 4:40:00 AM
Thanks Indiana. I’ve taken the liberty of adding a foreword to this poem. It would be interesting to see if opinions change in any way.
Date: 12/15/2018 2:52:00 AM
Terry, your poem is a tremendous tribute to a sterling career of entertaining others because you truly care. I puts me in mind of some of the greats in our land -- Elvis, Glenn Campbell, Jerry Lee Lewis, James Brown, Johnny Mathis --- the list goes on and on. I applaud you for your career as a singer/entertainer, and as a poet who can put his life into words that are pleasant to read. Congratulations and Merry Christmas.
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Date: 12/2/2018 6:08:00 PM
Your poem is such an intimate portrayal of personal reconciliation so beautifully and emotionally expressed. Congratulations, Terry, on your wonderful and well deserved first place win. Warmest wishes.. Susan
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/2/2018 6:14:00 PM
Thankyou Susan. Very much appreciated.
Date: 12/1/2018 11:03:00 PM
A wonderful well written intimate poem,Terry, congratulations on your 1st place win.
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/2/2018 3:01:00 AM
Thanks Eve. Guess it wasn’t too bad, considering my first idea for the contest was something about the last mammoth.... weird how the human mind works.
Date: 12/1/2018 12:32:00 PM
Beautiful... So beautiful! Keep it up souper.
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/1/2018 1:37:00 PM
Thankyou Funom. Appreciated.
Date: 12/1/2018 11:18:00 AM
- Many beautiful and deeply moving poems for this contest ... congratulations on your win, Terry :) - hugs & happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/1/2018 10:41:00 AM
Brilliant poem Terry, you captured the moment perfectly... Great take on the contest also.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Terry Flood
Date: 12/1/2018 1:34:00 PM
Thanks. It’s nice to ‘succeed’ with something serious rather than my usual comic.
Date: 11/28/2018 9:58:00 AM
I think this is wonderful, Terry. There were some delightful images here but I hope that you still enjoy the therapeutic, joyful power of song for your own pleasure.
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/28/2018 10:15:00 AM
Thanks Wendy. No autobiography in this, although I do sing incessantly. I’m just a basically happy guy. Mind you, I probably sound like a lion with a nail in its foot. Alas, if I’m not singing, im humming or whistling... IT DRIVES MY OTHER HALF BONKERS!!!

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