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My Fiftie's Chevrolet

A used Monte Carlo was my first car. It couldn’t be driven so very far. Though it had been well used, It did not look abused. Less a ride than a fine objet d art. Seven miles to the gallon, all it got. We stopped at the gas pump, more than a lot. Though gas prices were low, My wages were also. The car was pretty, its performance not. I have had a number of cars since then. None have made me as proud as I was when I drove that sporty car That could not go too far Before a stop for a fill-up again. By; Joyce Johnson For Carol's contest "My First Car" Won no. 2

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/15/2014 5:51:00 PM
Haha I love this, I had a Camero that became a pretty lawn ornament for years since it cost too much to fix it for what it was worth. Excellent poem and I see it drove you to number two :) very neat :)
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Date: 3/13/2012 6:06:00 PM
Well written and nice.Congrats on your win for this superb write,Joyce.
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Date: 3/13/2012 2:01:00 PM
Congratulations Joyce, well done xx
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Date: 3/13/2012 12:50:00 PM
congrats Joyce on a grand second place win for this spectacular entry.. oh how I loved those Monte Carlo's sleek and sweet..
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Date: 3/13/2012 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and thank you for supporting "My First Car" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/6/2012 2:34:00 PM
That sporty car, yes I can imagine that you were proud Joyce.Luck to you in contest.- oxox big hug Anne-Lise
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