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My Feet Were Screaming

My feet were screaming about the concrete walk. I ignored them totally, they are prissy and always squawk. Better pay attention! Trilled a passing loud beaked chicken hawk. I rolled my eyes. I know his wife. He is one to talk! Come on! They screamed, we will be limping soon. They like to complain all day until we see the moon. I am not going to feed them sympathy with an empathy spoon. I kept walking, maybe a little harder now, bringing them more doom. But wait! Yelled my brain. Who are you actually hurting here? I was limping now, and I could feel blisters climbing up my heel’s rear. I am afraid to teach them a lesson, I was the one to learn so clear That to not take care of your feet actually hurts you, my silly dear!

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Date: 4/22/2021 5:03:00 PM
Caren, this is so entertaining and funny. My feet don't yell at me any more; I haven't worn high heels in years! Well done! Janice
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/22/2021 8:23:00 PM
Me either! I am a tennis shoe woman

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