Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

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My Favourite Song - Bridge Over Troubled Water

When I’ve had dark times in my life,
and need uplifting at times of strife
I listen to the words of this lovely song
and get comfort and aim to be strong

The path of life is winding not straight
Many troubles can be put down to fate
We need friends till our dying day 
Who’ll be with us come what may

We all need good friends by our side
to dry sad tears, too many I’ve cried
They’ll be there any time that we need
Special friends to be cherished indeed!

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Carole Duet May 24, 2017 at 3:39 PM Congrats Jan. I knew you'd place in this contest with that poem. Just great! Jan Allison May 24, 2017 at 4:35 PM Thanks Carole it is an all time favourite poem of mine:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. May 23, 2017 at 1:16 PM Hi Jan, What a well written poem. I love the song you chose. You expressed very well what this song means to you. It was just what I was looking for. Thanks for participating in my "Your Favorite Song" contest. Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis Jan Allison May 23, 2017 at 5:31 PM I've loved this song since I was a small child I actually find it quite emotional to listen to it is so so moving:-) hugs Jan xx

Charlie Smith May 23, 2017 at 12:43 PM Great song. Loved Elvis's version and I don't really like Elvis that much. Well done Jan, congratulations... Jan Allison May 23, 2017 at 5:30 PM The original version is the only one for me Charlie and is a song I have down for my funeral as i love it so much:-) oh aren't I a happy bunny lol:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray May 23, 2017 at 4:04 AM When I was at my lowest, I had three angel friends care for me Jan. I pictured them as the legs of a little three legged stool, keeping me from toppling over. Big congrats on your placement with this classic poem to join a classic song. Jan Allison May 23, 2017 at 5:26 PM What a wonderful way of coping with tough times of your life - I know you have three daughters and these are the real three little angels in your life :-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper May 22, 2017 at 10:13 PM Nicely done! Congratulations on your first place win! Jan Allison May 23, 2017 at 5:24 PM Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Debbie Duncan May 13, 2017 at 1:47 PM Love this song, and love your poem. Last I read 5 yrs ago Garfunkel is living up northern Calif teaching & singing guitar :) Jan Allison May 14, 2017 at 7:23 AM Wow what an awesome teaching experience that would be Debbie!:-) hugs Jan xx

Stephen Pennell May 3, 2017 at 2:48 AM great singing duo so many great songs stephen Jan Allison May 3, 2017 at 3:00 AM I agree Stephen their lyrics and harmonies were superb:-) hugs Jan xx

Cheryl Hoffman May 1, 2017 at 9:28 AM Beautiful words in their classic song and awesome write depicting the song! G/L in the contest Jan! hugs~Che :) Jan Allison May 1, 2017 at 4:42 PM Thanks so much Cheryl it is very difficult to write about one song I have so many that have memories for different reasons but I have always loved this song:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich April 30, 2017 at 7:10 PM Oh, Jan, this song played so much on the radio, I just got sick of it. Kind of like Hey Jude. Anyway, it truly IS a classic wonderful song and I adored the singers! have you seen ART Garfunkel today? you would not even recognize him. Hey. Go see the nut jokes I added to my poem.They were "cracking" me up at Google images Jan Allison May 1, 2017 at 4:41 PM I could never tire of the song Andrea - I will check out Art Garfunkel and go read your nuts poem lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Liam Mcdaid April 29, 2017 at 6:15 PM its a song that sings deeply beautifully penned jan wishing you a blessed weekend pal Jan Allison April 30, 2017 at 4:50 AM Thanks Liam it is a beautiful song and very special to me, it makes me emotional every time I hear it:-) hugs Jan xx

Roy Pett April 28, 2017 at 3:21 AM Beautiful poem Jan, excellent choice of song, best one that I have read. Jan Allison April 28, 2017 at 4:13 AM aww thanks Roy:-) hugs Jan xx

Phillip Garcia April 27, 2017 at 7:08 PM This is also great. You always say you can't write sonnets but look how well you rhyme these quatrains. 2 more lines and it'd be a brilliant sonnet (not as good as mine, mind you, but brilliant all the same). Regarding the song, I'll have to ask my mom about it. I'm not OLD enough to know it Jan Allison April 27, 2017 at 7:25 PM ha ha ha love to see your humour come flooding out again Phillip - yes I have a hang up about writing sonnets lol. Click on the link the song I am sure YOU will know it and I am sure your mum will know it too lol:-) Take care my friend so good to see you bouncing back:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen April 27, 2017 at 12:54 PM - I love that song, Jan - A beautiful poem for pleasure :) - A winning poem ... it must be - Good luck and a 7 from me :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison April 27, 2017 at 2:08 PM Thanks Anne-Lise it is a very special song for me:-) hugs jan xx

Darren White April 27, 2017 at 6:07 AM Beautiful my friend, you have outdone yourself! All the best in the contest <3 Jan Allison April 27, 2017 at 6:10 AM aww Darren you are so sweet:-) I struggled to write for the contest as there are many songs I adore, but I've loved this song since my childhood and it has many memories for me and still makes me teary the moment i hear the opening piano chords:-) hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis April 27, 2017 at 1:59 AM What a marvelous poem: Beautiful, profound and true. It surely gets a 7 from me. Good luck and many hugs dear, Jan! Jan Allison April 27, 2017 at 4:20 AM Many thanks Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane April 26, 2017 at 11:31 PM This is one of those songs that I sing until my tears begin to fall and my voice crumbles. Your verses are descriptive of what friendships should include. Nicely done, Jan. Jan Allison April 27, 2017 at 4:20 AM Thanks Lin I love this song it is so so special to me in my life - have loved it since I was young:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May April 26, 2017 at 9:24 PM Very nicely penned poem and a beautiful song Jan...best wishes Jan Allison April 27, 2017 at 4:21 AM Thanks Jospeh:-) hugs Jan xx

Akkina Downing April 26, 2017 at 6:28 PM Absolutley beautiful. Inspiring and true in every way. I love it :) Jan Allison April 26, 2017 at 6:34 PM Thanks Akkina its a very special song to me:-) hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne April 26, 2017 at 5:56 PM Yeah me too, love the song, love many of paul simon's lyrics, love this poem, love you, love to fav your poetry. lots of love...love, armand. Jan Allison April 26, 2017 at 6:05 PM aww Armand you always brighten my day my friend I see so many people love this song as much as me:-) love and hugs as ever JAN XX

Carol B. April 26, 2017 at 5:06 PM This song gives me the goosebumps! Jan your poem is spot on. You have written a poignant poem. Loved it!! Jan Allison April 26, 2017 at 5:09 PM Thanks so much Carol I see many of the people who have commented like the song too... it always makes me teary when i hear it as it is a very special song to me:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe April 26, 2017 at 4:05 PM Oh, that is one of my favorites, too! Fond memories of my teenage days... Jan Allison April 26, 2017 at 4:13 PM It makes me very emotional when i hear it Agnes and it will always be a very special song to me:-) hugs Jan xx

Lisa Ricci April 26, 2017 at 3:58 PM Hi Jan. This is beautiful in every way. Your entry is smooth and inspiring. The song.... What can be said for such a song... Well done completely and entirely. Good luck with the contest. PS I love this song. Jan Allison April 26, 2017 at 4:12 PM I struggled to write for the contest as there are so many songs I love but this is a VERY special song to me and makes me emotional every time I hear it:-) Moon river is another one that brings tear to my eyes:-( hugs Jan xx

Carole Duet April 26, 2017 at 1:16 PM Love your poem, Jan. It is sooo true too and I also love this song. Jan Allison April 26, 2017 at 1:23 PM Thanks so much Carole. I wish I had your talent for song writing!:-) hugs Jan xx

John Hamilton April 26, 2017 at 12:02 PM Glad you picked this one Jan, I picked it for S.O contest last year. It is also my favourite song, was contemplating doing it again but the memories it evokes are too strong right now. Wonderful writing Jan! Jan Allison April 26, 2017 at 12:06 PM I get emotional as soon as I hear the opening piano chords John it really is a very special song :-) hugs Jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu April 26, 2017 at 10:53 AM Bridge Over Troubled Water is my favourite song.You are right right we need good friends. They are hard to find.I enjoyed this poem. Jan Allison April 26, 2017 at 12:08 PM Its a lovely song Darlene I have many songs I adore but this one is particularly meaningful to me and I get emotional as soon as I hear it:-) hugs Jan xx Darlene De Beaulieu April 26, 2017 at 10:54 AM yes it was me that asked the question. Thank you for the answer.

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