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My Favorite Mistake

its all behind let it stay there am moving forward please help me I am not drowning I just woke up from a long nightmare that I thought was a sweet dreams how I wish your still there just the way we we're before but time has changed and things sometimes are not there where it use to be but then I want to hold you in my arms want to feel your warmth all over me want to hear your soft voice in my ears it's my favorite mistake its all behind let it stay there am moving forward please help me I am not drowning I just woke up from a long nightmare that I thought was a sweet dreams how I wish your still there just the way we we're before but time has changed and things sometimes are not there where it use to be but then I want to hold you in my arms want to feel your warmth all over me want to hear your soft voice in my ears it's my favorite mistake - 8/6/07

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 11/30/2012 5:49:00 PM

Michael; This is pretty good. I never thought of a favorite mistake. I tell you that the worst mistake that you can make is not learning anything from it. Have sweet dreams. Lucilla

Michael Hilario
Date: 12/2/2012 12:55:00 PM

Lol, Thanks for the comment Lucilla. I just happen to see that sentence and it's a song title and it made me thinking as you do. What is my favorite mistake? Then I went writing. Yes we all learn from them, at least we should. But the one favorite you should have is something you thought was right and fun and then realized it move forward and succeed. Good AM!