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My Favorite Christmas Memory

I always wanted a dollhouse with Barbie toys, just as my brother wanted G.I. Joe for little boys. We’d wait all year to see what we would open, anticipating with excitement to get what we were hoping. Eve came quickly and family soon arrived, my brother and I had a sneaky plan we contrived. We’d quietly peek in our parent’s room under the bed, and shake all the presents while others were being fed. One year I accidently (yeah right) opened a gift, tore the corner off of the paper and it began to lift. I was being a little brat and acting selfish with pride, only to find a sincere surprise buried deep inside. It was a card from mommy telling me she loved me so, and how she always wished for me to know. “Angels danced the day you were born”, then I began to cry, so happy yet forlorn. My brother asked why I was crying so hard, I said, "because mommy gave me such a special card. I don’t deserve such a tender gift from her heart, I feel terrible for tearing this special gift apart." How was I to wrap it back up the same way as she? for she would instantly know that it was me. I was embarrassed and felt like a spoiled little kid, so, I ran like a baby to my room and hid. Mommy looked everywhere for me that night, I was still feeling sorry for myself; out of sight. She finally opened my door to ask why I was crying, I said, “I feel sick today”, but she knew I was lying. She held me so tight and said, “I wish you felt better”, I felt so guilty and said, “I found your Christmas letter. I’m so sorry for ruining the genuine surprise”, then she gently wiped away the tears from my eyes. “Oh sweetheart, don’t you ever worry or fret, I know opening your gift is something you regret. But you are just a curious little girl on Christmas Eve, now come down stairs before all your cousins leave.” She seemed so nonchalant and okay with what I’d done, so, I hurried downstairs to my cousins and had fun. The next morn the gift was wrapped again with love, I remember the wrapping, it had an ivory turtle dove. I asked her why she wasn’t mad the night before, she said, “oh, honey that’s not what Christmas is for.” I opened up the gift but this time I saw the Barbie, she bought it last night at midnight just for me. My heart grew ten times like the Grinch who stole Christmas, and thought, “when I’m older, I’m really gonna miss this”. I had the best day and thanked mommy for my special gift, thank the Lord for the wrapping paper that I decided to lift.
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December 1, 2017 Writing Challenge- December, 2019 - I Want Christmas Poems Sponsor, Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 12/15/2019 5:13:00 AM
Lu, congratulations on your win in my Christmas writing challenge with this sweet story and memory, your mom sounds amazing, and you were loved so much. I did the same thing one year when I was a little girl, looked then wrapped the gift again and I ruined my Christmas morning and I think my mom knew but she said nothing ~
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Date: 12/14/2019 3:37:00 AM
What a lovely story for Christmas Luloo. Congratulations on your First Place win. Mele Kalikimaka! xxoo
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Date: 12/14/2019 2:03:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Laura
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Date: 12/14/2019 1:10:00 AM
Hi Laura, Such a wonderful telling of your story. It brought back a memory of doing the same thing one Christmas. You really captured the shame of a child and the forgiveness of a parent and isn't that what Christmas is all about. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/2/2017 6:53:00 AM
Laura, this is such a beautiful, sweet story. Thank you for sharing it. A winner in my book. John
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Date: 12/3/2017 10:33:00 AM
thank you dear John, I am so appreciative of all your wonderful comments on my poems :)
Date: 12/1/2017 10:42:00 PM
A FAVE, Laura, you hit this one out of the park!
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Date: 12/3/2017 10:33:00 AM
awww thank you sweet Line, and for always bein the one who leaves comments on my poems, you are special to me :)
Date: 12/1/2017 9:42:00 PM
Oh, Laura. this is SO sweet. I am glad to read your own special memorable time with that lovely message from your mom. I have a few letters like that from my mom but she often gave them at my birthday time. ARen't moms the greatest. Thanks for my win in your contest. And have a great Christmas season we are in!
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/3/2017 10:32:00 AM
aww thank you dear lady :) You are always too sweet to me. Yes I have many letters from my sweet mom :)
Date: 12/1/2017 6:49:00 AM
What a lovely memory and told so poetically.... This is a heartwarming write Lullooo..
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Lu Loo
Date: 12/3/2017 10:32:00 AM
thank you sweet silent One, it's a true memory too :) lulooo

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