My Fave Season

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First day of Fall—hey, I love the way I feel today “Just a simple little ditty, not too long and not so witty, but a feel-good sweet refrain that I’m proud of all the same.” —by poet

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Christina Bowring

Date: 10/7/2023 11:34:00 AM

I love this monorhyme Mark. Great rhyming. Very melodic with great flow. Enjoyed it my friend. Thank you for sharing :)

Mark Toney
Date: 10/7/2023 11:56:00 AM

Thank you, Christina, for taking the time to make my day brighter. Enjoy your weekend!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/29/2023 3:39:00 PM

Clever Monorhyme Tony! I haven't heard or used the word 'ditty' in quite some time. It is the perfect word for it does rhyme with witty. Nicely done, Sara

Mark Toney
Date: 9/29/2023 11:44:00 PM

Hi, Sara. Thanks for taking time to give such a delightful comment. I appreciate the visit!

Karen Croft

Date: 9/24/2023 11:40:00 PM

Catchy!

Mark Toney
Date: 9/29/2023 11:47:00 PM

Thank you, Karen. I missed this comment on 9/24, but now that I’ve seen it I appreciate it all the more :)

Karen Jones

Date: 9/23/2023 9:50:00 AM

Charming

Mark Toney
Date: 9/23/2023 9:56:00 AM

Grateful :)