Robert Gorelick Poet Quatrain

My Fathers World

Sunk comfortably aloof in his mauve reading chair
Dad's evening reverie; pipe, cheese, crackers and book
His world vanished in smoke swirling into the air
For his family; an occasional vacant look

Yet he'd take time to spin me a bedtime story
Of enchanted lands and daring schemes
Flights of fancy depicting heroic glory
Betraying his real life's unmet dreams

My dad's inner home, the one he preferred
Was far from our world's cruel, petty strife
His family and solace was the written word
Though he was good to his kids and true to his wife

This world was too much with him somehow
A scathingly mean-spirited bother
But I just remember his soft kindness now
Blessed to have had such a father

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Gershon Wolf July 8, 2023 at 8:50 PM The outer man vs. the inner man. You were fortunate to have met the inner man, your true father. Always wish I had. Peace, Gershon

Suzanne Delaney June 19, 2023 at 3:49 PM A wonderful tribute to your Dad’s memory. I enjoyed the read. SuZ Robert Gorelick June 19, 2023 at 7:32 PM Thank you SuZ. Memories of my father tends to become richer with every passing year. Hope your fathers day was pleasant.

Speaks Volumes June 18, 2023 at 11:29 PM Robert a fine tribute to your Dad. No matter how strong and masculine, when there is a gentle side, it tends to be remembered most. Your Father sounds like one to be very proud of, and your poem speaks volumes that you are. Well done, Robert Gorelick June 19, 2023 at 7:34 PM I find that my father was a much finer individual as time passes, and am able to ponder more on my experiences with. Thank you, for your frequent visits and thoughtful remarks.

I Am Anaya June 18, 2023 at 7:32 PM You shared an intimate look inside, of your inner most feelings of your father with us. Thank you, Robert. I will cherish and favorite it! :) Happy Fathers Day! Robert Gorelick June 19, 2023 at 7:36 PM Thank you for the fave, it's a kind gesture and much appreciated!!

Michael Tor June 18, 2023 at 5:39 PM Robert your truth speaks from your Heart. Your father sounds like a dad who loved his children and his wife. It brings me pleasure to know you had such a dad... I wish you a Happy Fathers Day today and thank you for sharing how special your dad is and will ever be. God bless you... Robert Gorelick June 19, 2023 at 7:38 PM Fatherhood is a difficult proposition, that one should be thankful for a job done-well. Thank you and hope yours went well! Blessings to you, Michael