My Father's Blessing

My Father's Blessing (A Rondel)

His wrinkled hand would touch my head
And lift his eyes to the mountains:
He’d ask the Lord that I be blessed,
Have His peace and enough graces.

Excited, off I went with speed -
Lived world’s lies; drank turbid fountains.
His wrinkled hand would touch my head,
And lift his eyes to the mountains.

Late I understood this kind deed;
His hands asked for heavenly gifts; 
Unto me a Godly blessing flows.
Preserve her from harm, he would plead
And lift his eyes to the mountains.


7/28/14 
This is dedicated to my Father whose birthday is on August 2. Remembering 
also how he would bless me every time I am to leave home for school faraway 
from family. May his soul rest in peace and may he smile at his now big girl for 
he is well-pleased. :))
 “The Lord bless you and keep you; The Lord make His face shine upon you, 
and be gracious to you; The Lord lift up His countenance upon you, and give 
you peace. “ Num. 6:24-26
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A   Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 8:37 AM
thank you for the reply
A   Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 10:12 PM
Hija, :) The best policy is kindness and respect. Congratulations, on your "Random Acts of Kindness" win... Have a sweet day or night... Love LINDA
De La Luna Avatar
August 11, 2014 at 7:27 AM
Thanks, Linda! :) God bless you!
Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 10:25 PM
oh my, I thought you were describing the father in heaven, but how sweet that your own mortal father was like your heavenly father to you!!!
De La Luna Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 10:56 PM
Thanks, ANdrea! Amidst his frailties, God's blessings flow through him and cascaded to me :)
Johnson Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 11:40 PM
I am sure he is smiling and glad that you remember his blessing. congratulations. Love, Joyce
De La Luna Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 8:40 PM
He sure is, Joyce. Congratulations on your win, too!! :) God bless you.
Mehta Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 5:07 AM
Nice touching dedication to your father. congrats. hija
De La Luna Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 5:27 AM
Thank you, Dr. Ram! Congratulations! i love your piece. :)
Guzzi Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 3:10 PM
Very touching, thanks so much for sharing. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
De La Luna Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 9:37 PM
Thank you, Debbie, for the appreciation! Grateful for the kindness you extend by holding this contest, too! God's love and light to you!
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