My Father's Blessing

My Father's Blessing (A Rondel)

His wrinkled hand would touch my head
And lift his eyes to the mountains:
He’d ask the Lord that I be blessed,
Have His peace and enough graces.

Excited, off I went with speed -
Lived world’s lies; drank turbid fountains.
His wrinkled hand would touch my head,
And lift his eyes to the mountains.

Late I understood this kind deed;
His hands asked for heavenly gifts; 
Unto me a Godly blessing flows.
Preserve her from harm, he would plead
And lift his eyes to the mountains.


7/28/14 
This is dedicated to my Father whose birthday is on August 2. Remembering 
also how he would bless me every time I am to leave home for school faraway 
from family. May his soul rest in peace and may he smile at his now big girl for 
he is well-pleased. :))
 “The Lord bless you and keep you; The Lord make His face shine upon you, 
and be gracious to you; The Lord lift up His countenance upon you, and give 
you peace. “ Num. 6:24-26

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/2/2014 8:37:00 AM
thank you for the reply
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Date: 8/6/2014 10:12:00 PM
Hija, :) The best policy is kindness and respect. Congratulations, on your "Random Acts of Kindness" win... Have a sweet day or night... Love LINDA
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/11/2014 7:27:00 AM
Thanks, Linda! :) God bless you!
Date: 8/2/2014 10:25:00 PM
oh my, I thought you were describing the father in heaven, but how sweet that your own mortal father was like your heavenly father to you!!!
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/2/2014 10:56:00 PM
Thanks, ANdrea! Amidst his frailties, God's blessings flow through him and cascaded to me :)
Date: 8/1/2014 11:40:00 PM
I am sure he is smiling and glad that you remember his blessing. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/2/2014 8:40:00 PM
He sure is, Joyce. Congratulations on your win, too!! :) God bless you.
Date: 8/1/2014 5:07:00 AM
Nice touching dedication to your father. congrats. hija
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/1/2014 5:27:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Ram! Congratulations! i love your piece. :)
Date: 7/31/2014 3:10:00 PM
Very touching, thanks so much for sharing. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 7/31/2014 9:37:00 PM
Thank you, Debbie, for the appreciation! Grateful for the kindness you extend by holding this contest, too! God's love and light to you!
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