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My Fate My Life

Using the Octodil Form 44/66/88/66 Around it turns My fate my life Can happiness prevail It is in my own hands My own deeds, the way I desire good ideals, not just for oneself Round and around it turns My fate my love my hopes. Penned 26 January 2015 by Seren Roberts Contest Name : Tarot Cards using no 3 The Wheel of Fortune tarot card

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Date: 1/26/2015 6:55:00 PM
Check your sylable count, I think line six is off. Change self to myself and it will be perfect.
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Date: 1/26/2015 5:22:00 PM
oh la la fantastique, kisses xoxo
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Date: 1/26/2015 8:23:00 AM
As fate would have it, I loved this poem!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/26/2015 9:06:00 AM
Thank you my friend .... Seren
Date: 1/26/2015 12:08:00 AM
Very nice! Good luck in the contest. =^..^=
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/26/2015 9:07:00 AM
Hi Rachel, thanks for the luck ...Seren
Date: 1/25/2015 11:44:00 PM
Great verse. Spot on for the wheel of fortune card. Good luck in the competition. Love shane xxx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/26/2015 6:06:00 PM
thank you Shane ....Seren

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