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My Fate My Life

Using the Octodil Form 44/66/88/66

Around it turns
My fate my life
Can happiness prevail
It is in my own hands
My own deeds, the way I desire  
good  ideals, not just for oneself
Round and around it turns
My fate my love my hopes.


Penned 26 January 2015 by Seren Roberts

Contest Name : Tarot Cards 

using no 3  The Wheel of Fortune tarot card

Copyright © Seren Roberts | Year Posted 2015

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Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/26/2015 6:55:00 PM Check your sylable count, I think line six is off. Change self to myself and it will be perfect. Login to Reply

Etienne Lariviere Date: 1/26/2015 5:22:00 PM oh la la fantastique, kisses xoxo Login to Reply

Arthur Vaso Date: 1/26/2015 8:23:00 AM As fate would have it, I loved this poem! Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 1/26/2015 9:06:00 AM Thank you my friend .... Seren

Darkland Poetry Date: 1/26/2015 12:08:00 AM Very nice! Good luck in the contest. =^..^= Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 1/26/2015 9:07:00 AM Hi Rachel, thanks for the luck ...Seren

Shane Cooper Date: 1/25/2015 11:44:00 PM Great verse. Spot on for the wheel of fortune card. Good luck in the competition. Love shane xxx Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 1/26/2015 6:06:00 PM thank you Shane ....Seren