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My Fantasy

In fantasy, we're Dagwood and Blondie, Never aging a single day, With a dog who is destined to be ever young And children teenagers to stay. No sad war nor big problems to plague us We live in disaster free world. Dagwood's dark head never loses a hair, Blondies tresses are perfectly curled. I fancy we live in the comics And no longer have difficult days. If dark clouds roll in, they roll out again And we're basking in sunshiny rays. I did not receive that sad phone call, Telling me that I'm now on my own, That my children have lost their loved father And I am to raise them alone. In my dreams we now live in the comics, Where each Sunday's a new day of laughter. My love did not die and I need not cry. We're together forever and after. Inspired by Christy's challege

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/24/2009 10:58:00 PM
Hi Joyce, beautiful and wonderful fantasy. Good luck in the contest. I have featured poem this week. Ernilando
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Date: 4/14/2009 11:59:00 AM
love your fantasy mine is about a girl..oh, and a car you should check it out
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Date: 3/30/2009 12:25:00 PM
Smile~"You Are Soo Precious Joyce, Are You Not!:) What a wonderful dream and fantasy! Filled with such tender creativeness~which reflects such a beautiful heart!:) I am so thankful that I have met "You!"~For "You" truly are, precious indeed!:)~"My Love & Warmth Forever, To You & Yours, John!"~"Have A Very Glorious Day Dear!":)~"Beautiful Write!"
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Date: 3/28/2009 5:09:00 PM
A wonderful fantasy....if only in our dreams, where the world could be so easy, carefree, and as silly as the comics. Good luck in the contest, Joyce. So touching and Well done. love, Carrie
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Date: 3/28/2009 3:18:00 PM
This is very touching..well done. Good luck in the contest. BG
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Date: 3/28/2009 2:15:00 PM
What a beautiful fantasy, Joyce. Wish we could all linger in better days. A fine entry for Christy's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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