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I awake six a.m. August 26, 1971, My new BRIDE by my side The fingers of the Sun caressing HER long silken auburn hair Creating a kaleidoscope of Sunsets EVERLASTING SUNSETS My eyes caress the MEMORIES of last night : Warm hugs, Kisses Hot from Desire a passion WE equally share : one + one =one Entwined Together in a Nature knot of lustful LOVE : FOREVER SHE stirs : I watch the body of a Goodess awake : LENORE MY ETERNITY I stare at a Haloed Cherb face My Heart breathes inhaling HER Beauty I see HER eyelids open ; and jump into the cool Green Pools of Her Eyes Green eyes Becken : I hesitate, I kiss HER rosa lips : I sit HER up YOUR first of many Breakfast in Bed Fruit Crepes, Lox and bagels “I made it Myself “ I awoke again in REALITY --- ALONE Inspired by Fabulous Fantasy Contest Sponsored By : CRISTIE MOSES

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Date: 2/15/2012 10:50:00 PM
Love your concept one+one=one! This was such an amazing poem. Glad it got a placement in a contest at one point. Definably deserved! Always, Laura
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Date: 4/5/2009 1:06:00 PM
Sorry this is so late! Warmest congrats my dear, sweet brother on your amazing poem winning in Christie's contest! Also way behind on the soup, think I mentioned to you my daughter's wedding was yesterday. Hope to catch up soon. Love you! Big hugs, Shar xoxo
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Date: 4/4/2009 11:44:00 PM
HGarvey my "Cool Name" associate how are ya doing - Wonderful Poetry my friend - Congratulations on your H.M. in Christies Contest – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 4/4/2009 8:58:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Christie's contest HG.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/4/2009 12:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your fantastic poem and well deserved win in Christie's excellent contest.
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Date: 4/3/2009 9:24:00 PM
Im so very proud of you..BG
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Date: 4/3/2009 11:33:00 AM
Nice job with the reveal at the end, HGarvey! I can appreciate the longing for the one yet to be found that makes all that much more splendid! Congrats on the win! Regards, John.
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Date: 4/3/2009 6:53:00 AM
I loved this the first time I read it, and so well deserved to be among the winning poems! Well done, and Congratulations!! love, Carrie
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Date: 4/3/2009 6:24:00 AM
Congratulations on the honorable mention in Christie's contest. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/29/2009 5:23:00 PM
What a beautiful fantasy, HG. She must have been such a dear and wonderful woman. This is written with such tenderness and love. Good luck! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/21/2009 3:16:00 PM
Me again..thank you for your lovely comments on my "fantasy" However..mine is silly compared to this write..Its deep and has so much soul...I vote for you...Barbeeg
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Date: 3/19/2009 1:00:00 PM
I like the unique format and the fact that you let us know your fantasy took you into the past. Breakfast in bed! Sounds like a nice dream to me. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and for your kind comment. Have a good day! Karen
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Date: 3/19/2009 8:14:00 AM
We would all give up our own wishes, if we could fulfill your own...dear friend. This speaks with such tender emotion. Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/19/2009 5:45:00 AM
The most beautiful fantasy I have read. How I wish it could come true for you. Good luck in the contest. Love and hugs, Shar
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Date: 3/19/2009 4:59:00 AM
To sunset at dawn and identify the presence of Lenore ... the hunger of the raven? I like when things make me curious.
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Date: 3/19/2009 2:33:00 AM
HG Such emotion in your poem. If I had a wish come true I'd take you back there myself. Full of love. I hope you do well in the contest my friend. God bless. Leon
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Date: 3/19/2009 1:38:00 AM
Thank you!!!!!! :) Love, Kristin
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Date: 3/19/2009 1:37:00 AM
Such a beautiful fantasy/reality/fantasy again...heartbreakingly sad. but beautiful. as for the voting - it is for my 3 yr old daughter, in the Hallmark Mother's Day contest. the card I entered with my little girls picture on it (of her jamming her pretty little fingers UP her nose!) won as a finalist! You can vote everyday for a winner, then buy the cards after 4/4/09 until mother's day-whoever get's the most votes/sell the most cards-wins!http://www.hallmarkcontests.com/parenthood/reveal.cfm
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Date: 3/18/2009 11:54:00 PM
wow... i love the way this is... so simple yet so sophisticated in style! i love the first stanza... and best wishes for the contest!! ~ Arany
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Date: 3/18/2009 11:39:00 PM
Absolutely Beautiful HGarvey, best of luck in the contest...
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Date: 3/18/2009 9:36:00 PM
HG, since I know where this comes from in your heart, I ache for your loss. We should all have someone who loves us this way! Thank you for sharing your beautiful, heartfelt poem with us. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/18/2009 6:18:00 PM
True outpouring of emotion and love in this write. Very romantic fantasy. Nicely done. Best of luck in the contest. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/18/2009 6:17:00 PM
You have a winner here HG..I'm going to cry over this one..again. beautiful job. Beeg
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