Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Poet Free verse

My Fantasy

I awake six a.m. August 26, 1971, My new BRIDE by my side
The fingers of the Sun caressing  HER long silken auburn hair
Creating a kaleidoscope of Sunsets  EVERLASTING SUNSETS

My eyes  caress the MEMORIES of last night : Warm hugs, Kisses
Hot from Desire a passion WE  equally  share : one + one =one
Entwined Together  in a Nature knot of lustful LOVE : FOREVER

SHE stirs : I watch the body of a Goodess awake : LENORE MY ETERNITY
I stare at a Haloed Cherb face My Heart breathes inhaling HER Beauty
I see HER eyelids open ; and jump into the cool  Green Pools of Her Eyes         
Green eyes Becken : I hesitate, I kiss  HER rosa lips : I sit HER up  YOUR first  of many         
Breakfast  in Bed    Fruit Crepes, Lox and bagels “I made it Myself   “

                               I awoke again in REALITY  ---  ALONE

                               Inspired by Fabulous Fantasy Contest  
                                   Sponsored By : CRISTIE MOSES

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Laura Breidenthal February 15, 2012 at 10:50 PM Love your concept one+one=one! This was such an amazing poem. Glad it got a placement in a contest at one point. Definably deserved! Always, Laura

Sharon Winter April 5, 2009 at 1:06 PM Sorry this is so late! Warmest congrats my dear, sweet brother on your amazing poem winning in Christie's contest! Also way behind on the soup, think I mentioned to you my daughter's wedding was yesterday. Hope to catch up soon. Love you! Big hugs, Shar xoxo

Michael Jordan April 4, 2009 at 11:44 PM HGarvey my "Cool Name" associate how are ya doing - Wonderful Poetry my friend - Congratulations on your H.M. in Christies Contest – God Bless, MJ

Brian Strand April 4, 2009 at 8:58 AM Congrats on your success in Christie's contest HG.Rgds Brian

Nigel Fawcett April 4, 2009 at 12:30 AM Congratulations on your fantastic poem and well deserved win in Christie's excellent contest.

Barbara Gorelick April 3, 2009 at 9:24 PM Im so very proud of you..BG

John Weber April 3, 2009 at 11:33 AM Nice job with the reveal at the end, HGarvey! I can appreciate the longing for the one yet to be found that makes all that much more splendid! Congrats on the win! Regards, John.

Carrie Richards April 3, 2009 at 6:53 AM I loved this the first time I read it, and so well deserved to be among the winning poems! Well done, and Congratulations!! love, Carrie

Lena Townsend April 3, 2009 at 6:24 AM Congratulations on the honorable mention in Christie's contest. Smiles from Lolita

Robin L. Gass March 29, 2009 at 5:23 PM What a beautiful fantasy, HG. She must have been such a dear and wonderful woman. This is written with such tenderness and love. Good luck! Love, Robin

Barbara Gorelick March 21, 2009 at 3:16 PM Me again..thank you for your lovely comments on my "fantasy" However..mine is silly compared to this write..Its deep and has so much soul...I vote for you...Barbeeg

March 19, 2009 at 1:00 PM I like the unique format and the fact that you let us know your fantasy took you into the past. Breakfast in bed! Sounds like a nice dream to me. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and for your kind comment. Have a good day! Karen

Carrie Richards March 19, 2009 at 8:14 AM We would all give up our own wishes, if we could fulfill your own...dear friend. This speaks with such tender emotion. Love, Carrie

Sharon Winter March 19, 2009 at 5:45 AM The most beautiful fantasy I have read. How I wish it could come true for you. Good luck in the contest. Love and hugs, Shar

L'Nass Shango March 19, 2009 at 4:59 AM To sunset at dawn and identify the presence of Lenore ... the hunger of the raven? I like when things make me curious.

Leon Wilson March 19, 2009 at 2:33 AM HG Such emotion in your poem. If I had a wish come true I'd take you back there myself. Full of love. I hope you do well in the contest my friend. God bless. Leon

Kristin Reynolds March 19, 2009 at 1:38 AM Thank you!!!!!! :) Love, Kristin

Kristin Reynolds March 19, 2009 at 1:37 AM Such a beautiful fantasy/reality/fantasy again...heartbreakingly sad. but beautiful. as for the voting - it is for my 3 yr old daughter, in the Hallmark Mother's Day contest. the card I entered with my little girls picture on it (of her jamming her pretty little fingers UP her nose!) won as a finalist! You can vote everyday for a winner, then buy the cards after 4/4/09 until mother's day-whoever get's the most votes/sell the most cards-wins!http://www.hallmarkcontests.com/parenthood/reveal.cfm

Arany P. March 18, 2009 at 11:54 PM wow... i love the way this is... so simple yet so sophisticated in style! i love the first stanza... and best wishes for the contest!! ~ Arany

Belinda Parish March 18, 2009 at 11:39 PM Absolutely Beautiful HGarvey, best of luck in the contest...

Carolyn Devonshire March 18, 2009 at 9:36 PM HG, since I know where this comes from in your heart, I ache for your loss. We should all have someone who loves us this way! Thank you for sharing your beautiful, heartfelt poem with us. Love, Carolyn

Lena Townsend March 18, 2009 at 6:18 PM True outpouring of emotion and love in this write. Very romantic fantasy. Nicely done. Best of luck in the contest. Smiles from Lolita

Barbara Gorelick March 18, 2009 at 6:17 PM You have a winner here HG..I'm going to cry over this one..again. beautiful job. Beeg