My Family

we were adopted on the same morning 
my father loved us, a love adoring 
my brothers shared a gene name, Cabernet 
sisters noble parents based on hearsay 

my dad built a strong house of fine French oak 
we stayed there for months until the walls spoke 
Sauvignon muscular and the strongest 
Franc dark and lean and can stay the longest 

Merlot is too shy and soft as satin 
me, Petit Verdot, was told to fatten 
we left that house for a place very small 
this was a time of character for all 

life a blend of love and time but real 
dad says it’s a Bordeaux surreal appeal 

-updated July 2016-
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Callaghan Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 1:51 AM
Really great James, I enjoyed very much. Fiona
James Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 5:27 AM
Thank you Fiona
Roper Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 12:14 PM
Enjoyed reading the foundation of the family you have blessed with your pen a7. Hugs Eve
James Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 12:40 PM
Thanks very much Eve.
Murray Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 4:11 AM
Could I be your long lost sister? "What once were vices are now habits."
James Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 3:08 PM
You said it sister!!
Makama Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 2:53 PM
Lovely and so precised to the heart with a very good linking understanding to the mind. A definite 7
James Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 3:07 PM
Thank you Funom!
James Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 12:25 PM
Thank you Funom!
Warrior Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 8:07 AM
Love the family sonnet James...very well done my friend...C'est Magnifique!...god bless...^WW^
James Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 12:26 PM
Thank you WW
James Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 1:04 PM
subtle update...
James Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
My other vice!!
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