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My Fallen Brother

White marble stones Stand proud in the sun To remember my colleagues The heroic fallen ones Many a battle Many a campaign Some did return For some never the same On the green grass i stand Blue sky above The souls of my comrade's Like peaceful sitting doves The name on this stone Reminds me of the day My best friend and brother Was taken away An offensive was launched Brothers at war Bunker to take At the top of a tor Smoke screen exhausts the view to the hill As we wind our way through Zipping bullets, blood spill Noises of lead, as they rip through the flesh As we hit the barbed wire Now a scarlet stained mesh Objective in sight as we approach our aim As i hear the groan of the injured Many dead and maimed Grenade pin pulled Bunker window we lob Hands sweating How many lives will we rob Explosion flash with shouts of pain As the smoke lifts on this bloody terrain We enter the Bunker To witness our task The enemy lie distorted Faces grimace, death mask I turn to my brother, to signal its safe As a shot rings out, in this theatre place He stands still for a moment Eyes glazing and cold The death of my sibling At 19 years old As i open my eyes, and turn to my son I see what i had, as he holds my grandson Family values, love and a bond As i remember my brother Of whom, i was so fond I proudly walk past, salute as i go The white stones standing proud Peaceful doves in a row I find my self fortunate to stand here and tell To talk of my brother, and the fallen as well http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/war-2.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/19/2009 6:57:00 PM
Very good write,loved it,thanks for the comment on my poems as well.I am so very glad you are proud of your flag,to many people take life for granted and do not respect it,I try to remember all the fallen and all yet to fall and respect what I have in life.Thank you for reminding me of that. A friend always,Charles Ruble.
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Date: 8/1/2009 11:45:00 AM
Excellent write James. I found myself lost in the verses seeing the battle and hearing the battle. I was overwhelmed at the sheer volume of poems you possess. Off to read we are Marshal. Thank you taking the time and reading so much of my poetry and the wonderful comments. It means even more seeing what a talented individual you are.
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Date: 6/18/2009 10:57:00 PM
James, this really builds well. I like the accretion of detail. " Scarlet tained mesh" is a compelling visual. You really felt this and it shows on the page. Not too much to quibble about here. The ending has a sense of basic power-commerical, but effective. I like this better than some other poems that I have read on this subject. This is a keeper, to be treasured and passed on to your progeny. Regards, GK
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Date: 5/30/2009 6:07:00 PM
This is another part of being a great soldier, this is the sad part that breaks my heart.....always, Christy
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Date: 5/21/2009 4:54:00 AM
So sad...brought tears to my eyes....good write
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Date: 5/17/2009 2:17:00 PM
this is deep sad and true,if only wars would come to an end--great write and tribute for honoured hereos---charma
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Date: 5/17/2009 2:17:00 PM
James, you have been "tagged" in the Soup game. Please read the poem and tag another! Love, Carolyn (soup mail for you momentarily to explain the game)
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Date: 5/17/2009 1:56:00 PM
Your memoirs from the battlefield are only surpassed by your pride in both your brother and the fallen comrades. James, this is brilliant! It reminds me of how it felt to walk through Arlington Cemetery near Washington, D.C. How sad your brother died so young, but I love hearing of the values your family inspires, especially your grandson. Excellent writing again, James! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/17/2009 1:44:00 PM
This is a powerful write my friend..each stanza is very strong..you make the reader feel the pain...very well written my friend.
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Date: 5/17/2009 12:47:00 PM
Wow what a attribute to all the falling soldiers in any war every line was heartfelt and deeply sad. Someday our humanity will find a way to stop the wars and live peacefully! Very Well done! Laura :)
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Date: 5/17/2009 12:42:00 PM
This is great! I was in the Air Force and we helped out on a lot of Army ops. This is exactly as it is right now in the desert. Very touching and truthful! Nate
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