My Existence

shaped and formed with love,
                                       now spreading wings to fly,
                                       lives with values and pride.

                                              amazing beauty,
                                     she holds in a humbled heart,
                                         always give sweet smile.
 
                                         beyond beauty reveals,
                                    strong and powerful dreams,
                                        change her existence.

                                        pull the string of heart,
                                     she sings a song of lost love,
                                           longing for her man.

                                      dancing young maiden,
                                 while the wind softly blowing,
                                       she's a wild flower.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Boddie Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 10:00 AM
natural Beauty is by far the best....because God's Work can only impress....allowing Love to truly manifest....& Love is the purpose of Life I must confess....simply Beautiful poem....;)
Delaney Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 10:56 PM
Love that last line....something precious about wild flowers because they bloom despite adversity. Keep your sweetness, always. SuZ
Callus Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 4:20 AM
How delightful, Aiyah!! Love the ending! Congrats on your win. Have a lovely day! hugs // paul
Roper Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 12:01 PM
Congratulations on your win a 7 on this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve
Fraser Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 11:30 AM
Beautiful existence of you to poetry Aya, lovely to read, hugs, James..
Lamoureux Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 8:45 AM
Congrats on a fine win.
La France Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 7:43 AM
Aiyah, enchanting and exceptional, congratulations on your win in the contest
A. Sharma Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 10:29 PM
Aiyah this is so lovely,, congrats on ur super win!
Merryman Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 9:00 PM
A beautiful string of senryu, Aiyah! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
A  Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 6:49 PM
AIYAH, Congratulations on the win. SKAT
A   Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 6:26 PM
Hi Aiyah, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 4:57 PM
A pretty verse. Congrats for your win.
Nunez Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 10:50 AM
Lovely thoughts on existence in this string of senryu, Aiyah. Congrats!
A   Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 12:26 AM
a loving write, enjoyed this senryu *luv, p.d.
Torres Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 1:23 PM
thank you,P.d. :O)) I still giggle every time I see your comment in my poem.. ^_^ feels struck !! ^_^
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