My Existence

shaped and formed with love,
                                       now spreading wings to fly,
                                       lives with values and pride.

                                              amazing beauty,
                                     she holds in a humbled heart,
                                         always give sweet smile.
 
                                         beyond beauty reveals,
                                    strong and powerful dreams,
                                        change her existence.

                                        pull the string of heart,
                                     she sings a song of lost love,
                                           longing for her man.

                                      dancing young maiden,
                                 while the wind softly blowing,
                                       she's a wild flower.

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Date: 7/31/2015 10:00:00 AM
natural Beauty is by far the best....because God's Work can only impress....allowing Love to truly manifest....& Love is the purpose of Life I must confess....simply Beautiful poem....;)
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Date: 7/16/2015 10:56:00 PM
Love that last line....something precious about wild flowers because they bloom despite adversity. Keep your sweetness, always. SuZ
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Date: 7/5/2015 4:20:00 AM
How delightful, Aiyah!! Love the ending! Congrats on your win. Have a lovely day! hugs // paul
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Date: 7/4/2015 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win a 7 on this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/4/2015 11:30:00 AM
Beautiful existence of you to poetry Aya, lovely to read, hugs, James..
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Date: 7/4/2015 8:45:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win.
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Date: 7/4/2015 7:43:00 AM
Aiyah, enchanting and exceptional, congratulations on your win in the contest
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Date: 7/3/2015 10:29:00 PM
Aiyah this is so lovely,, congrats on ur super win!
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Date: 7/3/2015 9:00:00 PM
A beautiful string of senryu, Aiyah! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/3/2015 6:49:00 PM
AIYAH, Congratulations on the win. SKAT
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Date: 7/3/2015 6:26:00 PM
Hi Aiyah, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA
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Date: 7/3/2015 4:57:00 PM
A pretty verse. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 7/3/2015 10:50:00 AM
Lovely thoughts on existence in this string of senryu, Aiyah. Congrats!
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Date: 7/2/2015 12:26:00 AM
a loving write, enjoyed this senryu *luv, p.d.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 7/2/2015 1:23:00 PM
thank you,P.d. :O)) I still giggle every time I see your comment in my poem.. ^_^ feels struck !! ^_^
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