My End Is Now

When I was growing up,
Daily they packed my outgrown:
Shoes, shirts,suits and trousers;
And paid me commendation
As they milled around me
Like night ants around light!

When I was geisha-guy
And my frame was fame
And my gaiety  was deity
Oh they milled around me
Like day ants around rose

When worker I was
And my table was the host
To all that delighted belly 
Oh they rounded me about
Applauded me with their belch
After my grain and grape.

Now my hairs are white
And my frame is gone
My teeth have left
Sight is dim, hearing is poor;
How quick they dessert me
Like a cinema after the show.

It is home alone
As they call me demented
The brats that once me hailed
No one to tell goodbye
Sad today I must go
My end is now.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/26/2015 1:48:00 AM
nice piece..."my hairs are white"...struck a personal chord!
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Date: 11/24/2014 9:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win for your sad but lovely poem. It is so beautiful expressed. Sandra
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Date: 11/22/2014 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations, this is so cool!
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 11/22/2014 11:53:00 AM
A delightful greeting,thank you very much Richard.
Date: 11/21/2014 9:30:00 PM
I just saw this the other day and am here to congratulate you on the superb win. it is not just lonely, but very sad.
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Date: 11/21/2014 8:14:00 PM
Oh, this is so sad Kayod5. We still applaud you for your great poetry.
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Date: 11/21/2014 5:40:00 PM
This is remarkable KAYOD5. Another truly inspiring verse I will Fave too. Congratulations on a masterful write
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Date: 11/21/2014 11:16:00 AM
heart wrenching Kayod congrats on win
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Date: 11/21/2014 9:58:00 AM
This is brilliant, I will add it to my favs. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 11/21/2014 10:40:00 AM
Thank you Maurice,you have always been there for me...huggs
Date: 11/21/2014 7:27:00 AM
Sadful expressions Kayod5 beautifully expressed! Congrats on awesome win!
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 11/21/2014 8:00:00 AM
Thank you Ma;nice to have your here.
Date: 11/21/2014 4:23:00 AM
oh such a sad sad write - I can relate to this so much with my family circumstances - a great pen kayod5 many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 11/21/2014 7:58:00 AM
Thank you Jan...huggs
Date: 11/19/2014 8:53:00 AM
What a poem! So riveting from start to finish...Oh, why does it have to be this way? Why? I'm so moved by your write....No, the end is not now. You are here to write and bring cheer to others and to get the glory you deserve. Hugs to you...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/19/2014 9:25:00 AM
I'm so so glad to hear this, my dear. Bless you for keeping in touch with her. I'll send her a note as well. I've been so wrapped up in my problems. Thank you.
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 11/19/2014 9:13:00 AM
Nice to read from you Eileen and I am happy you share my poetic feeling. Next: Donna penned me today,she promised to be here soon...huggs
Date: 11/18/2014 11:33:00 PM
Your end may be now, but your poetry will live on and in that way so will you! I loved this journey though your life! Excellent!
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Date: 11/18/2014 11:03:00 PM
I appreciate all your comments recently. Unfortunately I can't seem to keep up with comments this week. Wish I could see more of your stuff. But I only have time to return half my comments tonight. When I have more time, I want to read more of your poems.
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Date: 11/18/2014 11:02:00 PM
oh yes, that is life. So sad . I have seen old folks in the rest homes with nobody coming to love and pay attention them anymore. When even family is not there for you, that is the saddest of all. This poem really captures that feeling. Good poem
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Date: 11/18/2014 10:57:00 PM
Dear Kayode: So much of what you write is true. Enjoyed this poetic journey with you my friend. Leon
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