My Dreams

Some of them are drifting vapor,
fluid pastel flavoring my tongue.
When awake, they linger like nectar,
or the hidden symbols of Jung.

Others are more like nesting dolls,
hand painted selves inside of selves,
secret centers wrung in reluctant recalls.
Narcotic sleep concocts misshapened shelves.

Still others are Fabergé eggs,
grandiloquent intricacies, ornate and refined,
interior parlors absent of regs. 
Fantastic reservoirs are carefully designed. 

But most of them are made of celluloid,
cinematic  and impossible to avoid. 

Published in the first PoetrySoup anthology- 11/20

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 2/11/2021 3:26:00 PM
Well penned, Thomas ~ A pleasure to find your delightful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology
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Thomas Wells
Date: 2/12/2021 2:50:00 PM
Thanks, Line! You've brightened my evening with your cheer!
Date: 7/28/2020 9:33:00 PM
Hi Thomas. The metaphors here are striking. 'Dreams of drifting vapor.' The similes too are arresting and original: dreams "like nesting dolls." Superb. A most enjoyable read. Brian
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Thomas Wells
Date: 7/29/2020 6:24:00 PM
Hi Brian, Thank you so much! Have a wonderful day.
Date: 7/23/2020 10:21:00 AM
Hello Thomas Wells, your dreams seem to be a mixture of different things. Do you remember your dreams? Just wondering. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Thomas Wells
Date: 7/28/2020 3:58:00 PM
Hi Darlene, Sorry for my late reply. I just now spotted your comment. I remember most of my dreams, although sometimes I only recall an image or a feeling that the dream drew out. What about you? Do you remember dreams? Take care good friend.
Date: 7/18/2020 1:57:00 AM
Ah, so wise and such wonderful words. You are an avid wordsmith my friend.
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Thomas Wells
Date: 7/19/2020 2:43:00 PM
Thanks so much, Caren!
Date: 7/12/2020 1:40:00 AM
Great job dear Thomas. Stay safe!
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Thomas Wells
Date: 7/12/2020 2:56:00 PM
Hi Lure, Glad you liked it! Have a great day.
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