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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d8_fLu2yrP4&list=RDd8_fLu2yrP4&start_radio=1

 

Thanks to Tom Cunningham and Silent One for letting me know how to get the video embedded. I loved this song since i first heard it in high school.

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We kiss, but it’s only in my dreams and when we meet – deep is the night! Then I’m in your embrace, and I’m more awake than I am in the light of day, my dear. We kiss, and we are as one, my love. Oh, can it be just a dream? For I feel your breath, and it feels so real. Oh so soft - breath on my cheek - so sweet. And we kiss; then I’m awash with bliss. I want so much for you to stay. But you disappear. Oh, why must it be . . . love flees in the morning’s light, my dear? We kiss, but it’s only in my dreams my dreams my dreams my dreams June 28, 2020 for John Hamilton's the 'SONGWRITERS CHALLENGE' Poetry Contest Note: When I listened again and again to Roberta Flack's "First Time Ever I Saw Your Face," I heard her adding in a few little extra words here and there, so my lyrics are hopefully matched with her singing and not the exact syllable count as they are given in the online lyrics. This is a beautiful song that I can never hope to emulate with lyrics as fine as hers.

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Date: 7/2/2020 2:44:00 AM
Ah, delicate and beautiful; congratulations on your lovely win.
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Date: 7/1/2020 3:58:00 PM
Such innocent emotions Andrea! Tender hesitant love yearning to be embraced yet lost in dreams that comfort the heart. Love the blend of soothing emotions and a tinge of sadness in a beautiful song. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)
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Date: 6/30/2020 7:10:00 PM
Nice win with this romantic write, nice job matching the rhythm with the tune. Glad you included the clip of this timeless song. Congrats on your win, my friend!
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Date: 6/30/2020 1:47:00 PM
Such a lovely lyrical rendition of this song, Andrea. It is filled with deep longing and wonderful phrasing -"I'm more awake than in the light of day." Congratulations, dear friend! Many blessings!
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Date: 6/30/2020 12:21:00 PM
I like this and have never tried to put lyrics to music. Right now my mind just seems blank for some reason. Congrats on your win. love phyl
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Date: 6/30/2020 12:09:00 PM
I wonder about thoughts and dreams...wishes and reality...I'm not sure what is what...If you left it as you wrote it...it happened...I love the feel of the poem
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Date: 6/30/2020 11:52:00 AM
A wonderful write Andrea, I could hear the melody and follow along with your words, a captivating write, you did justice to the emotion of the song. Congrats on a nice win!
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Date: 6/30/2020 6:15:00 AM
Lovely lyrics, Andrea, I couldn't write one this time, don't know why... you did so good:)
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Date: 6/29/2020 10:48:00 AM
Lovely poem with so many great lines.. hints of sadness.... In regards to youtube, you have to go to the share option. Then select 'embed', then copy and past it into the required section underneath your poem.
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Date: 6/29/2020 12:23:00 PM
I tried that. I just don't know, Silent One.
Date: 6/29/2020 7:19:00 AM
Lovely lyrics, Andrea--a kiss as it should be, even if in dreams.
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Date: 6/29/2020 4:03:00 AM
As in the cosmos we sometimes reside, with minds and heart with love abide. Another beautiful write, never fail to please.
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Date: 6/29/2020 3:16:00 AM
Beautifully done Andrea, Love that song. Tom.
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Date: 6/28/2020 10:37:00 PM
Really nice romantic lyrics, Andrea, with just a touch of sadness. I love "Then I’m in your embrace, and I’m more awake / than I am in the light of day." Hope this does well, I suspect it will be a winner ~ John
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