My Dream Vacation - Alaskan Whale Tour

The highlight of my Alaskan vacation was a singular
unexpected breach of a humpback whale.

                                                         — by Poet

MY DREAM VACATION - ALASKAN WHALE TOUR

What’s a routine blubberflip, is a marvel to humans -
a breathtaking splash of epic proportions, a whirlwind
propensity to pail - empty salt-sea into the sun-blue air.

The striated humpback, in blubberbreach, sates
in eye appeal, strums in rhythmic entrainment, and
a solid gold breath erupts through the human blowhole.

Mood lighting of the sea and sky, the heavens riding
the wave of creation’s emotion - God’s largesse smiling.
Gratitude of the cruisers from this unexpected explosion

through the give way sea, the crop yielding a hundredfold.
The humpback’s beauty is in his creativity of timing, sublime
in oceanic movement, his fin-finish finer than a diver’s.

Furthermore, the cleansing of his blubberhide - ridding
himself of lice and barnacles — morass that when it lingers
annoys but triggers the acceleration to release his form

to exaltation - he swims the blessed air for a few seconds,
with flipper wings, angel kisses and applause. Neither
proud nor humble, as he pressures through the deep.

What’s a routine of man - to exercise his sea legs,
to gorge on the monsters of the sea, to breathe in
all that life can be — tremulous, terrifying, out of sight.*

3/8/2022
Sponsor: L. Milton Hankins

*out of sight - extremely good, excellent
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Krutsinger Avatar
March 9, 2022 at 12:53 PM
This is amazing! What a fish tale!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2022 at 12:57 PM
Thank you, Caren!
George Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 8:35 PM
Hi Kim, Let me repeat Gershon's Comment .... indeed 'a whale of a tale' of mammoth proportions. The momentary popping up of the royal whale in the air is beautifully and gracefully described ! A real joy!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2022 at 4:40 AM
Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed! <3
Wolf Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 6:25 PM
A whale of a tale, suitable for one with his/her sea legs... As for this landlubber, about all I can relate to is the blubber. ~ Hole in the Head
Rodrigues Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 7:29 PM
LOL! Was a momentous moment!
Cunningham Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 9:30 AM
It must have been a fantastic experience for you Kim. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 10:59 AM
Yes! I never scream out loud and this had me screaming in excitement! So unexpected and wonderful! Thanks, Tom!
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