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My Dream Vacation

Late into night we sat together to plan the vacation My husband mentioned an exotic hill station To which he had been once and had a great time But my sons preferred another spot fit for adventure Having entered no amicable settlement We decided to stop the discussion for the time being And do some Google search the next day And went to bed with plans still haunting me Don’t know when I slipped into a dream And in my dream I sailed far away over the tame waters Of a tranquil bay and landed in a magic isle Never set foot before by anyone alive A pleasant retreat of birds and beasts Far removed from world’s dust and heat A fantasy land with a magic spell Hidden away at Nature’s veiled breast The sky was rent with songs of birds The air, smelling of odors sweet Here and there were exotic blooms Bulrush, Blue bells and Lavenders fresh I roamed frivolously from end to end Of that enchanted land of idyllic charm With twining creepers and silken grass Proclaiming aloud of a perennial spring My heart leaped in euphoric delight My senses alerted in ecstatic thrill My feet moved in an explorer’s gait After the treasures stashed in its caverns deep I rambled relentlessly through untrodden paths Feasting on the marvels, my eyes could catch Arching trees framing a leafy roof And fruits, ripe and raw, hanging from every bough As I tiptoed to pluck the fruits hanging from a bough My hubby suddenly asked what was wrong Waking up from my sleep, I realized with a smile That I have been on my long planned dream vacation
March.16. 2022 My Dream Vacation Poetry Contest Sponsor- L Milton Hankins

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Date: 4/3/2022 3:37:00 AM
A truly wonderful dream vacation my dear friend. Congratulations on your win and this super piece! Thanks for sharing. Hugs
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Date: 4/2/2022 3:21:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! It's my prayer that the Lord will turn your dream vacation into a grand reality... God bless you.
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Date: 4/1/2022 10:09:00 PM
Back with congratulations dear friend. All the best. Happy writing!
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Date: 4/1/2022 12:09:00 PM
Back to say Congratulations Vasal, on win! Hugs ~ Debra
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Date: 4/1/2022 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on win! I have read it again.
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Date: 4/1/2022 7:48:00 AM
Beautifully-written with wonderful imagery. Congratulations on your placement in my contest, Valsa. Well-deserved!
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Valsa George
Date: 4/1/2022 7:49:00 PM
Thanks a lot Milton for the splendid chance given and for picking up my poem for a win ! Truly obliged !
Date: 3/20/2022 6:24:00 AM
Sounds like an idyllic destination, now you have only the children to persuade that it is 'a spot fit for adventure and a vacation of a lifetime , love this poem my friend and best wishes in the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/18/2022 9:05:00 AM
This is beautifully penned "My heart leaped in euphoric delight My senses alerted in ecstatic thrill My feet moved in an explorer’s gait After the treasures stashed in its caverns deep"
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Date: 3/17/2022 2:55:00 AM
Unplanned vacations are the best!! But dreaming a vacation seems much more to it. Looks like we can go anywhere and do everything we want to, not being bounded by those around us! Lol! But dreams are dreams! Just loved the way you penned your dream adventurous holiday!! I wish you get there very soon Valsa.
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Date: 3/16/2022 11:26:00 PM
I hope your life, Valsa, out side of the dream, is as wonderful as your poetry. You sure bring words and stanzas of joy here to PS.
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Date: 3/16/2022 7:05:00 PM
Well, you've had yourself a wonderful dream -- and saved yourself all the planning, the headaches, the travel glitches, not to mention a nice stash of cash! Good thinking. I'm going to suggest to my wife that we do the same! lol. Thanks for the idea, Valsa! :) Smiles, gw
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Date: 3/16/2022 7:46:00 PM
You are absolutely right, Gershon. What all I saved ! Now only, after seeing your comment, I gave a serious thought to it ! But please take your wife for a real vacation, not a virtual one so that she will forget for a while the atrocities done to her people.... ! Thoroughly enjoyed your comment . Thanks a lot....
Date: 3/16/2022 1:55:00 PM
Valsa, I thoroughly enjoyed your adventure. I felt like I was there with you. Nicely written. Good luck in the contest. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 3/16/2022 7:41:00 PM
How I would have enjoyed if you were with me Debra ! But dreams have no 'discriminatory sense'.... Lol. Thanks a lot !
Date: 3/16/2022 11:54:00 AM
Clever! Aloha!
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Valsa George
Date: 3/16/2022 7:39:00 PM
Thanks a lot Rico :)
Date: 3/16/2022 10:12:00 AM
My dream vacations are over now. I wish I could go to Rome, but I'm too old now.
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Valsa George
Date: 3/16/2022 7:39:00 PM
Age is just a number ! We are as old as we think ! Your romantic mind never gets old, dear Victor ! You can still plan on a vacation to Rome ! Our longevity has gone up so much . For another one more decade you can travel and see places of your liking !
Date: 3/16/2022 9:36:00 AM
Hi Lasaad, inadvertently, I deleted your lovely comment ! I am so sorry ! However thank you so much for your precious words
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Date: 3/16/2022 6:03:00 AM
What an amazing place!!! You took us along with you to that Dreamland through your lovely words... Enjoyed reading this...
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Valsa George
Date: 3/16/2022 9:22:00 AM
So delighted by your precious comment and sincere appreciation ! Thanks a lot Supraja !
Date: 3/16/2022 5:35:00 AM
A dreamland indeed--the best kind of magical themes always found in dreams. Enjoyed the description of your vacation, Valsa.
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Date: 3/16/2022 9:20:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay ! Your lovely comment is much appreciated !
Date: 3/16/2022 2:04:00 AM
A grand dream you had, Valsa:) sorry you had to wake up..
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Valsa George
Date: 3/16/2022 5:21:00 AM
It was a heavenly dream Jo ! Thanks a lot!
Date: 3/16/2022 12:22:00 AM
What an amazing dream Valsa, a shame you had to wake up. Tom
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Date: 3/16/2022 5:20:00 AM
Yes, it was so sad to have been woken up! :) Thanks for your kind visit, Tom
Date: 3/15/2022 10:49:00 PM
Haha..I wonder what was it (kind of fruit) that you were plucking that made your hubby awakened. Beautiful rendition of vivid sceneries..You've taken me there! Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 3/16/2022 5:19:00 AM
It must have been something very tempting ! I am sure it was never the 'forbidden fruit'.... Lol.... ! Thanks a lot Jez
Date: 3/15/2022 9:38:00 PM
Very beautiful dream. The vacation is grand, indeed. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/16/2022 5:17:00 AM
Thanks a lot Chris..... :)

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